增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ) 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, there was a time when everyone in class cast down and need a bit of a cheer. On an afternoon, our English teacher, Mr. Liu walked into our classrooms, he noticed our feelings. He drew a picture on the whiteboard, what showed a half-full glass of water. He then said, “Class, the point of view from which you look at things will affect your feelings. Like this glass of water, some people see it and think ‘Only half a glass of water. How unfortunately I am.’ However, other people think ‘I’m so thirst. Half a glass of water for you! It is all in the way we think.” Later, all of us kept up spirits, and at last our efforts was paid off.
Mr. Liu’s optimistic way of thinking always make me feel glad and hopeful. I’m so grateful that I’ve met so a good teacher in my life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Father’s Day. Having been finished my homework, I together with my sister went to buy some vegetables as well as a gift as planned. We were supposed to giving our father a big surprise. On our way home, we met with Grandpa Li, an old neighbour without children. Suddenly, I came up an idea. Then we went to his home with what we had bought. With his help, we cooked a delicious meal. After that we made a phone call to our parents but told them that we will have lunch at Grandpa Li’s. Hearing what we had done, we were very pleased, saying we were really caring. We helped Grandpa Li do a thorough clean after lunch. Tiredly as we were, we felt we had spent a meaning day. I believe it is a day when will be remembered by me forever in my future life.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
The long-desired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announcing the end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Li Ming and I were on the way back home. The train we took was such crowded that we had to stand. We both felt exciting because we had four week to stay with our parents. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. Under the help of Li Ming, I caught the thief and forced her to give back the purse to the old lady. The thief was taken away by the guard. Praising by other passengers, we felt proudly of what we had done.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
13. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
One afternoon, I finished painting and went to the girls’ bathroom to wash my mess brushes. I noticed that a girl was standing alone in the bathroom, silently weep. I approach her and asked that she was okay. She told me the problems she met. In order to put her with ease, I told her that she wasn’t alone but that I would do all I could to help her. When she left, I also gave her my phone number and made her to promise to text us that night. We ended up text most of the night. As result, she thanked me the next morning and told me that she would cheer up.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
After school, I was about to enter into my apartment then I saw a little dirty dog lying beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediate the homeless dog filled me with mercy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become a member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. We offered him a shelter and he has brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keeping on a dog. My parents disagreed, say that I was so young to take care of myself, let alone a dog. I didn’t give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and helped with housework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eight birthday, they bought me a lovely dog as the gift. Following my parents’ direction, I’ve learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those days that we accompanied each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month, I was playing outside while I heard a cat crying. I found her behind a parking car. She seemed very hungrily. I fed her, and she seemed to want to stay with me. I wondered where the sweet cat came from. I named him “Mystery”. A few day later, I noticed a phone number on Mystery’s coat. I called the number and got on touch with her owner. The same day, a lady comes to pick up the cat. The lady thanked to me and said all that her daughter wanted for coming Christmas was her cat. I was sad to see Mystery go, and I felt glad that the girl’s Christmas wish came true.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday Newspaper and expecting a couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to have tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone to the house on the another side of the street.
误，每句中最多有两处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的单词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下面画线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处错误，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Yesterday morning, I went to school by bus. However, I didn’t realize I had been left my bus cards at home until I got on the bus.With no money on me, I don’t know what to do. So I made an apology to a driver and was about to get on. Just then a young lady stopped us. She offered to buy a ticket for me, say she had experienced so embarrassing a thing. Seeing her sweet smile, I felt very happily and was really grateful to what she did. It was her kindness ,which I made up my mind to pass on to others made my day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
I’m Li Hua, a exchange student from China. Here I want to ask your for help. Yesterday, I went to the school library borrow some books. And to my great regret, I lost my blue handbag, that contained the keys to my bedroom and my bike, my ID card as well as some cash in a small black wallet. These things are important to me, because some of them contain my personal informations. I would be extreme grateful if anyone who finds it will return it to me as soon as possibly! Come to my classroom or gave me a call. My number is 2233445566. Thank for you so much!
