增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I was on my way back home from school while I found a little boy crying on the road. I stopped and asked him what is the matter, and he told me he couldn’t find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother’s telephone number. So I called him immediately. Ten minute later, the boy saw his mom and became exciting. His mom was so much thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, and I refused. At that time, I felt quite happily because I did something really good.
To my opinion, the world needs love and we should be willing to help others without expecting any repay. If we wanted repay, as matter of fact, a “thank-you” is enough.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Donny is my little brother, that is a naughty boy. In a sunny morning, Donny went into the yard and played with a dog. Several minutes late, a bird came down to stay on the top of the dog’s house which was about 10 meters far away from my brother’s. Then Donny threw a stone at it. All of sudden, Donny begins crying. Mother ran to Donny and asked her what was wrong. Donny said in tear, “I’ve broken my sister’s plate. She has beaten me.” “Why?” asked my mother in surprise. “I threw a stone at a bird, but it went straightly to the plate.” So was my naughty brother.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线。并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend I together with several classmates paid a visit Yellow Mountain. We set out early in the morning and get to the top of the mountain before the sunrise. Watch the sun rising was really exciting. We both had a good time there. When we wanted to leave, I spotted the backpack. Considering the owner must be very worried, so I decided to wait. With a policeman’s helps, I finally found the owner, a Taiwan tourist. Seen his backpack, he was so delighted that he wanted to give me some money as a reward, but he declined. Exhausted and late for home as I was, I felt more than happier to have helped others.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mum is a volunteer in a hospital. She brings dinner every Sunday with the people looking after their relatives who are in hospital.
One Sunday, Mum asked me to help her with dinner. At the first, I didn’t want to, in the end she persuaded me to go. Half an hour late, we arrived. We quickly set up a table and start giving people food. The people who were served there were deep moved. In order to show our gratefulness, some of them offered to help give out food. See smiles on the people’s face, I felt so pleased.
Stepping out not only helped people in need, it also gave me the sweetful taste of helping others.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除:把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Sun Yang wrote a book The Art of Finding Good Horses and Judging his Value. The book was based on his experience or knowledge over the year. In the book there was lots of pictures of various horses.
Sun Yang had a son which thought it was very easy judge horses according to the book. So he took it with him to look for finely horses. He found the characteristics of a toad (癞蛤蟆) fit very well for those describing in the book. So he happily took the one toad back home. Sun Yang did not know whether to laugh or cry.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it was Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On my way to the cinema yesterday evening I suddenly heard someone cried for help. I turned around but saw nothing unusually. Just when a girl ran to me in panic and pointed to the river, saying that someone has fallen into the river. I quickly ran to the river bank and soon found out a drowning boy trying to hold a piece wood in the cold water. Seeing this, I acted quickly, taking off mine overcoat, jumping onto the water and with great effort pulling the boy onto the bank. Because I missed the film because of what had happened, we still felt very happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happy I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( Λ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday was my best friend Li Ming’ s birthday. When school is over, I went to the bookshop. I bought a book calling “Exploring space”, and had it wrapped for him. Since he had wanted to buy this book for many week, I knew that he would be very pleased with my present.
While I got to the party, Li Ming said ‘hello’ to me with big smile. I noticed that there were many presents on the floor, but I was sure that mine would be her favourite. I gave the present to Li Ming but whispered in his ear, ‘You will love it’. He could not wait to unwrap it. Sudden, the smile on his face disappeared. I looked and I saw some big words on the cover of the book said, Caring for Your Baby! I had picked up out the wrong in the shop!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I liked sleeping lately at the weekend. My parents was often angry with me, but I didn’t take it serious. Last Saturday, a friend of me phoned me and we planned meet at the park at 8 o'clock the next morning. Watch my favorite movie until midnight, I went to bed even late than usual. I was so tired to hear the alarm and got up very late on the Saturday morning. When I got here my friends had already left. I felt so sorry for that.