My classmates and I were to graduate next month. We were determined to do anything. After a heating discussion, we decided on making a video to record our experience at school.
It took us a whole week to collect materials, during that we interviewed our teachers or took photos of every aspect of school life. The editing part before that was tough. We discussed what to put into the video. Some compromises are unavoidable, but the video proved perfectly. Several days later, when the video was playing on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The teachers and students shared a great time. That surely gave to us a great sense of achievement.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mom, my dad or my friends don’t know me as much as one person who I admire a lot. He’s my grandfather. My parents are both working busy and I have little chance see them during the week. They left the house at 7:30 every morning and get home around 8 pm. So it is my grandfather who keeps me company. He is the one which takes me for long walks and cycle rides. She plays football with me every Saturday. We share with stories and jokes and spend many happy moment together. If I do something wrong, it is he who saves me from get into trouble with my parents. My life is much rich because of my grandfather.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This was my five day at the summer camp.This morning I went down to the nearby river to fish, and the only thing I caught was a tree branch.In the afternoon, there were different activities they were planned to make us happy.In the evening, everyone was giving a task to get dinner readily.I was in the charge of preparing hot dogs, but I dropped them in the fire.Other kids couldn't stop laughing, but I still tried my best finish the task.However, the best part of the camp is at night when we sat around a camp fire and told story.What an interested summer camp!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, Jane. I want to tell you something about your trip. Yesterday it was sun and a little windy. I went a park for a trip with my classmates. Since the park is far away, so we took a bus to arrive there. How beautiful a park was! We swam in the pool and then play volleyball. We took a lot of food and ate it for lunch under a big tree. Then we listened to beautifully music and had a rest. On the afternoon, we went fish and took lots of photos. Both of us had a great time in the park.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
With Mother’s birthday approaching, I decided to give her surprise and celebrate it for her on my own. After finishing my work, I learned what to bake a cake online. I had everything needed after I started the baking process careful as instructed. I preheated the oven and mixed with the milk, eggs, butter or oil into the dry mixture. It take me roughly 20—30 minutes to bake the cake.
It was really a challenging job. And then, I was immediately busy prepared all the dishes. Seeing what she had done, my mother was moved with tear rolling in her eyes.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is many interesting idioms in China. Now let me to explain one of them, Ye Gong Hao Long. In ancient times there was the man called Ye Gong. He told everyone that he loved dragons very much．In his house almost everything decorated with dragon designs, including the walls, two window and doors. When a real dragon heard about his story, it was deeply impressing and decided to visit
Ye Gong. However, when the dragon stuck their head through one window,
Ye Gong was frightened and run away. Well, you see, this idiom is used to describe those people which appear to like something, and actually don't．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I go sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds sing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eyes. A young couple in a boat was eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, total ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior, that left me deep in thought, was terrible. If all visitor to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted but soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind their behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in less comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
增加：在缺词下面加一个漏字符号( )并在其下方写出该加的单词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；修改：在错误的单词下面划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow- covering road. Many people passed by, and no one took action. Some of them said it was none of their business; others worried if they helped him, they may get into a difficult situation. Seeing what had happened, I called 120 immediately. While waiting the ambulance, I took down my coat to keep the old man warm. In no time did the ambulance came. Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance, I felt relieved. In my opinion, this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A group of British explorer got lost in a desert. The sun was burning hot and everyone quickly ran out water. Later, the group’s leader took out the water bottle and said,”I found a bottle of water in my bag. But until we pass through the desert, anybody is allowed to drink it.” It was passing around the members of the team; it felt heavily. Finally, the explorers made it out of the desert. With tears of joy, they had opened the bottle, but out poured sand. Was it a bottle of sand which really saved them in the desert? The answer is no. Their deep faith in the hope of survive, like a seed, had taken root and grown in their hearts. That is what led us out of the terrible situation in the end.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出 修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday morning, hardly had I reached school while my attention was caught by a big poster on the notice board, saying that it would be the World Earth Day in a few of days.
Responding active to this, my classmates set to work immediately. In the afternoon, we brought to school what they thought to be of little value. Use scissors and paste, we made shopping bag and artworks out of them. After school, we went to the local community and launched a campaign, giving up what we had made and calling on people to make best of what they thought to be useless. Meanwhile, we hold a lecture in the community to raise people' s awareness of protecting the earth. We had a busy but meaning time.
