增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词，
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, I bought a cup of coffee for the old lady which was selling fruits and vegetables in the market near our school. At first, she was surprising and had a question mark on her face. She asked myself, "What is this for?" I replied, "This is appreciation for all your hard works in this cold weather." Then, she had bright smile on her face and was very happy. The look on her face made me proudly. Now, I realize in that every part of the world had a connection. The biggest thing I need to learn is what to connect and I believe that kind is the master key.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第n处起)不计分.
On Tuesday evening, when I got out of the bus I realized a man had left his phones on the seat next to me. I picked it up and waited for the owner's phone call, that he gave me two hours later. I told him I have gone home and would give to him the following day. So in my way to work the next morning I returned the phone back to him. He was so delighted and wanted to give me the reward, and I refused it and told him it was okay. He was very exciting. I also felt gladly for having done a good deed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Grandpa lives in a distant mountainous area with forests around．He runs a grocery store, that wild animals appear from time on time．One day, two small deer came to the door．They looked hungrily and Grandpa gave them some food to eat．Since now, the two deer have never left, lying in front of the shop after fed．Gradually, the lovely deer are popular, attract a lot of people to see them．As the result, Grandpa's business is getting even more better．The deer have become an alive advertisement, so more but more customers come to buy item in the store．Grandpa's kindness is paying off．
增加;在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧) ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Graham Lawrence, aged 29, who is now a science author, giving presentations on TV, was used to be a difficult and unwilling student at Overton School. At first, he didn’t do well at most school subjects because of lacking confidence.
However, everything changed the instant he met Mr. Jenkins, which class always brought curiosity and excitement to students especially with experiments setting up. For example, it’s great funs to use acid and an onion to show how the human stomach works. Those acts of creativity successfully drew Graham’s attention and made him inspiring.
In Graham’s opinion, it is Mr Jenkins whom aroused his interest in science and made a great difference to him to large extent. Without Mr. Jenkins, science won’t be his cup of tea. And of course he wouldn’t achieve so much too.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of the happier memories in my childhood was made snowmen with my friends. When I was the little boy, I always go out with my friends to make snowmen. Once we played with snow when it snowed heavy. We divided ourselves into several group, two or three people in each group. Then, each group started to make their own snowman. Our group used up buttons as our snowman's eyes and carrots for its nose. Before we finished our snowman, we compared ours with others' decide which group's snowman was the best. But it rarely snowed these years. How I wish I can make snowmen with those friends this winter!
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was very frightened when I woke up in hospital on last Thursday. Then my mum told me what happens. She said I fainted in my PE lesson because low blood sugar levels. Fortunate, I was rushed to hospital immediately. The doctor helped me and I made a fully recovery within two days. My experience has proved how a bad idea it is to try to lose weight by skip meals. Now I know this extreme weight-loss method have serious side effects. I also understand that being healthy and energetic is less important than being slim. From now on, I’ll pay more attentions to my health rather than my weight. Having a balanced diet and exercising regularly really count a lot!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Bob and my went mountain climbing last Saturday. We set off early on the morning, keep enough physical strength, we took the bus there instead riding a bicycle. During climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warmly sunshine and a beautiful view. Therefore, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottle and cigarette ends. Then we start to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put an litter into the nearby recycling bins and non-recycling bins separately. Tiring though we were, that we felt happy.
增加。在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I come across some friends in a party. We had dinner happy and talked about our dreams. One of the friend called Tom told us he had travelled to many places. We admired her very much. We all have dreams to travel, and few of us take action. Actually, once we have dreams, we should have them carrying out as soon as possible. Because of we are young, we are energy to explore the world. However, most of us haven't made it. As result, we fail to achieve that we expect.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My father is knowledgeable, because he can always give me advices and help me make the best decision. Having graduated college, he landed a job in a company, but soon he felt boring to sit in the office all the day. My grandfather suggested he thought carefully what he really wanted. Therefore, my father quit to travel across China, hope to find the answer during the trip. When he arrived at a mountainous village, and he was shocked to find there was a urgent need for teachers. How he saw in local children’s eyes moved them, so he decided to settle down and teach them. Now, he had students all over the country.
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Mia. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear Diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
