增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have always believed that sharing is one of the best thing in life. I’d like to sharing with you how sharing makes a difference.
During this summer vacation, I take part in a youth piano competition what was held in my city and won first prize. I was exciting that my hard work paid off in end. At the award ceremony, when asking how I achieved my success, I replied that it was largely due to my parents’ and teachers’ help, but it wasn’t my personal success. We were so proud of to hear that. At that time I realized the wisdom in the saying, ‘A joy shared is a joy doubled’.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored, and it seemed endless, what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. And I stuck to it with great determination .Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening Finally, I finished the job before the new term began.
Now, I understand what labor means. I think it is great experience.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Laughing is one of life’s most simple pleasure.It is free.You can do it anywhere.Like the flu,laughter can spread easy among people.Often when we hear someone laughing in crowded room or a packed train ,we start laughing too—even if we have no idea how.
In fact,mental health can affect on physical health.Therefore,“Laughter is the best medicine”does not mean that I should not take medicine when you’re sick.It simply means that have a positive outlook might help ease your troubles but make you cheerful.Besides,making others laugh with you is also an act what is joyful and kind.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改∶在错的词下画一横线、并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意∶1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Life is full of various experiences, some of them are unforgettable.I still remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 km a year before.That summer day,we set off early in the morning,think it would be great fun to walk for so long a distance. However,with the weather is getting hotter and hotter,I found their legs heavier and heavier.What's worse,my feet began bleeding because long time pressing against the shoes.At one point,I even thought of giving up.But I managed to dragging the rest of the way to the destination.Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding. I have learned life is a long journey like this.No matter what happened,we should never give up.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A proverb says, “Time is money.” But on my opinion, time is even more valuable than money. Why? Because when money is spent, we can earn them back. However, when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason that we must value time. The time for our study and work is quite limit. But there are a number of people who do not know the important of time. They kill time by chatting or drinking. They didn’t realize that wasting time is simple wasting their valuable lives. In word, we should develop the good habit of saving time. Don’t leave what can be do today till tomorrow. Laziness will not only bring to us failure but also make us lead a poor life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through countless failure. Instead of getting discouraged after failures, we should keep trying with enthusiasm.
At an age of twelve I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I could wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was hard than expected. The bike seemed so heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls from the bike. I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.
Looked back, I feel that if I had lost my heart, I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike. Actually, we couldn’t succeed in everything we try, but what’s important is that we should stick to it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Things have become differently since I cut my hair short. There were no special reason for me to do this. I just chose from a hairstyle I liked. One day, I go to the theater with my mom. A little boy besides me was looking at my face while I was waiting my popcorn. He might have thought I was a boy. I just turned around, smiled at him and said “hello” polite. He was surprised and apologized at once. He might have realized that I am actually the cute girl. I know people look at me out of curious. Beauty has many forms. I think the most beautiful thing is being confident and appreciating you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Due to the outbreak of COVID-19, I was stuck at home for a period of time, lived a life I'd never experienced. At first, 1 hated the virus for causing panic. Besides, I gradually became thankful for that I learned. All people joined together and fight together, from which I understand what a great nation we live in it. I also understand how closely people are connecting. That's because we should help each other out in times of difficult. In addition, we should also take stop and review our relationship with nature. I believe everyone has learned something and the reflection will ensure us a better tomorrow and a bright future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Will our parents check our homework? Not really. Since having already growing up, we can’t act like little baby and rely on our parents all the time.
When I was in Grade Three, my parents asked us to check my homework by myself. I don’t know what to do in that time, so I cried. Before that, I got used to correcting my own homework and became more independent.
Check homework by ourselves is very good habit. It can not only help us find mistakes in exams more easy but also let our parents worry less about our studies. Because parents will leave us some day, so we should learn to do everything by ourselves.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
People always say that life can 't go on good all the time, because we will meet all kinds of difficulty. When we are students, we want to get improving and get high marks in the exams. When we graduate and find the job, we need to finish all the tasks what are given to us on time. Even after retiring, we still come across something difficult in our life. Although life is difficult, we should get used to them. When we face with the difficult time, we ought consider it as a test for us. When we get through it, we will gain value experience. The pleasure we get make us proud.