增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to help us students fully appreciate the beauty of China, our school hold a “Charming China” micro-video contest last weekend.
Lasted for three hours, the event proved the huge hit. More than two hundred video were submitted and varieties of eye-catching elements were included, ranging from local cultural activities like tea-drinking and lion dances splendid local attractions. More impressive works, that displayed the great changes that had been taken place in China, focused on the combination of traditional lifestyles and modern urban development.
This contest is real inspiring and meaningful. Not only can this event enrich our school life, and it can help us learn how lucky we are to live in so a great country.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to carry forward the Lei Feng spirit, a series of activities was held by our School Student Union with a 60th “Lei Feng Day” approaching. Our school held a flag-raising ceremony theme “Learn from Comrade Lei Feng” on Monday. Our headmaster appealed to us students strong to learn from Lei Feng, which devoted his spare time to helping the needy. After that, the song called on people to learn from Lei Feng was sung by every class. Every students did a good deed. Some did some cleaning in the park. Other went to the nursing home to take part social activities. After sixty years later, the Lei Feng spirit is still alive, inspiring a new generation of Chinese people.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday witnessed a friendly basketball game between students and teachers in our school with the aim of fueling students’ passion for sports as well as release their overwhelming pressure. Bathing in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed with their teachers in the basketball court surrounded by the rest of the students, who were watching excited. Both teams were playing at their best in high spirit. Although the teachers took the lead in a game at first, the students did not lose their heart and tried to catch up with their opponents. The game was filled in great excitement and passion, and ends in a draw of 2:2. Not only the exciting game relieve the students’ intense stress, and their relationship with the teachers was also strengthened.
4 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our school holds a Chinese classical music festival in the concert hall to promote Chinese traditional culture. All the students took part in of it.
During the festival, classics played by Chinese classical instrument, such as erhu and Chinese zither, were amazed. Among them, High Mountain or Flowing Water drew the most attention. Besides, that interested the students most was that an opportunity was providing to learn these instruments from some experts.
The festival turned out to be success. Having participated in it, all of we realized that we should be great responsible for inheriting and popularizing our traditional culture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many senior high school students have children’s book that they no longer need. Therefore, my school organize a book drive, with the purpose of donate books to disadvantaged families with young children last weekend. The activity lasted for a week and students in mine school were encouraged collect gently used children’s books from family members, friends and neighbors. I, along with other volunteers, were responsible for checking the donated books and packing them. In order to perform the task well, I had learned what to pack things from my father in the advance. Though I was tiring at the end of the week, I was happy that I got involved in doing something that is benefit to the community.
There was a important basketball match yesterday. I had a quickly lunch and went to school. I found difficult to work in class because I kept on thinking about the match in the afternoon. Match ended a little earlier. Our teams was playing against the team from No.6 Middle School. Their team was a very big and strong. And we felt a little afraid for them. Our team was neither very big or very strong. But we were sure we can beat the other team because we had very good teamwork but we could play together very well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many students in our school don’t have enough time do sports. Most of our time is spent on study, which causes some health problem. Thus, our school is held Sunshine Sports activities to improve our physical but mental health. The activities are conducted on every afternoon. We are free to do however we like. The schoolyard is full of laugh and life. As the name suggest, the Sunshine Sports activities make us sunshine boys and girls. Besides, we have a good understanding of sports, friendship as well as team spirit than before. Up to now, the activities had received high praise from both students and teachers.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the aim of recycling used books and presenting them to children in the need, the students’ union will launch a campaign titled “Secondhand Books Donation” next month. To start with, donation boxes, that are about to be collected by the volunteers twice a week, would be placed in classrooms. In addition, what is also acceptable to take donations directly to your office on weekdays. Then, the collected book will be delivered to the primary students in remote but rural areas. This activity is great significance. Not only will the children get books to read, but also we will gain happiness by help others. So let’s participate active in it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For the purpose of reduced stress, a series of activities were held in the school playground in Mental Health Day this year. Students from three grade got involved in the activities actively. Among these activities, a lecture giving by a psychological professor provided us with professional guidance, which helped us understand when to deal with it in life and study. Beside, a debate on Stress, Motivation or Depression were conducted among students. These activities turned out very successfully. Not only they help us develop a positive attitude to stress, but also they too helped us build strong wills.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, our school launched a campaign which intention was to promote environmental protection. The campaign lasted for one week. Firstly, there is a photo display to show the seriously pollution caused by human activities. Secondly, there was a lecture on many small step that we could take in our daily life to protect environment. For example, taking the bus or use the bike-sharing system would be a good way. Last but not least, we students were encouraged to decorating our classrooms with recycled materials. Through the campaign, we have been learned a lot. We realize that it is our responsible to leave a better, clean and healthier planet for future generations.