增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The famous environmentalist, Professor Jin, was invited deliver a speech in our school last Friday. He started with an universally accepted theory explaining how the Earth began. We were shocking that there were so many kinds of living thing on the planet long time ago. However, he also showed how the appearance of some species happened later. It was human activities that large changed the global environment. He pointed out we should attach importance to protect the environment. It decided that we were able to continue to live on this planet in the future or not. I was deeply impressed by her speech. I think of it is important to protect our only home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, our school hold an activity themed “Forbid Littering in Our School”. It left an unforgettably impression on me. Aiming to solve the problems causing by casually littering in, and it asked us to pick up rubbish. Many student just ignored our school rules and littered everywhere, what made it annoying to walk around the school. It was not only bad our health but let us develop bad habits. Through this activity, we realize the importance of protecting the living environment in your school and many of us volunteer to help those who breaks the school rules. We believe we can make the big difference together.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Boys and girls,
May I have your fully attention, please? I have announcement to make. To welcome our friends from the United States, the Student Union was going to hold a party on Saturday evening, February 20, what will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building. They will begin at 7 pm. There will be dancing, singing or exchanging of gifts. Everyone please to bring along a small gift on this purpose. Remember to pack it up, sign your name and writing a few words of good wishes. Don’t miss the party, and I believe we will have much funs.
Thank you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An activity themed “Student Talent Show" was held last week, thus attracted many students to participate. The activity was lasted from Monday to Saturday, during which time students with special talents signed up, prepared but competed well. The final competition fell on Saturday afternoon, when all the teens and child showed their great talents. Some presented her amazing singing voices when others showed their incredible dancing skills. What impressed us most was the one who danced from a rap music while playing a tongue twister. The activity had impact on everyone. It’ s entire believed that such an event will not only improve students’ ability but also promotes their love of life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday morning, we held a meaningfully performance in front of the Walmart supermarket where there were several hundreds people. Our goal was making people to think about the overuse of plastic bags. Several volunteers wore plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd. The performance called on people to use cloth bags instead of plastic one. Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from the customers in two food markets and the others were collected from the primary school. On that day, when leaving the supermarket, the customers advised to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn’t need. Lots of plastic bags were collected for just two hours.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month my new school had witnessed the First Online Life Skills Show. Here comes a brief account.
The activity, consisting with two parts, began with a talent show where participants demonstrated our practical skills. This was followed by a voted process. Some distinguished teachers acting as judge made comments and gave awards to whomever displayed the best expertise. However, what made this show great success is that not only did it provide a golden opportunity for the participants to sharpen their skills and it also sparked audience’s passion for acquiring various life skills.
Both students and teachers speak high of this activity. I sincerely hoped that more activities of this kind will be held in the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, a tug-of-war competition was held in our school playground to enrich students’ campus life.
Each of the ten groups was consisted of ten boys and eight girls, carefully selecting from each class in Senior 3. Every group was well prepared but did some physical training, making the competition extreme intense. Loud cheers could be heard here and there, which encouraged the athletes to try our best. After several round, Class 2 won the first prize.
The event turned out to be great success. Not only did it made our campus life colorful, but it also taught us the important of team spirit.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A tree planting activity was held, which our whole school took an active part in on last Sunday.
When we arrived at the planting site, where came into sight were different varieties of young trees. We divided into two groups. One group was responsible for digging holes, and the others for planting young trees. On our face flowed down sweat. All of us spent a meaningfully weekend.
Now seen the lines of trees, we have a better understanding of how hardly the job is and how precious the trees are. However, we should treasure the trees and making efforts to better our world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to promote participation in outdoor physical exercise, our school organized a activity to climb Mount Hua last Sunday. The majority of my classmates joined the activity. Early in the morning, we gathered outside the school gate and head for Mount Hua. We were in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In the course of the climb, we cooperated with each other and eventually we reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. There we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game. This event was extreme beneficial. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, our school organized an English speech contest, which theme was Learning to Be Grateful. The activity was aimed for encouraging us students to have a grateful heart. All the students in the senior grades go to watch it in the school hall. Five experienced English teachers inviting to act as judges were all from our school. Twenty competitors attended them in total. They did so great job that nearly half of them was rewarded. In my view, the contest is extreme meaningful and instructive. To be grateful is a traditional virtue of our nation, which contributes many to social harmony and makes us to become responsible citizens.