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Andrew Mathews,
You must never give up (放弃) your dreams too. There will be many
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As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
1. 你的梦想；
2. 实现梦想的措施。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I have a dream
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a dream that one day I could be the pianist. I dream of play a sweet piece of music for those who need music, bringing happiness for other. I love music and I love the feel of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the musical sounds, the beautiful but powerful sound a piano makes impresses me much. It’s clear I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practice for two hours every day if time permitted and learn as many songs as I can. I will put down my heart into my dream and never give up. I am confidence that one day my dream will come true.
1. 梦想是什么；
2. 梦想是怎样产生的；
3. 准备如何实现梦想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Everyone has a dream. So do me. When I grow up, my dream is to be a scientist. As the matter of fact, being a scientist had been one of my dreams since my childhood because scientists are the most knowledgeable and selfless in my mind. They devote themselves to help work out difficult problem in our life. They work hardly to help people in need, asking nothing in return. Science can promote the development of the world, and I’m sure I will make the world good if I can become a scientist. I know it will be no easy job. Therefore, I believe my dream will be come true.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A couple from Xinjiang did something unusual. They made special trip to Tian’ anmen Square to realize his dream of watching the flag-raising ceremony.
The couple, that live in Tacheng Prefecture of Xinjiang, ride two horses and set off in May. Although they met such many difficulties on the way to Beijing, but the people they met treated them with kindness. On Aug. 1st, they arrived in Beijing and watched the ceremony with their hearts filling with excitement. The wife said this trip broadened her horizon. She told the reporter that she was deeply impressed by our country’s surprised development.
Working hard and assisted by our country, people in Xinjiang feel strong that their future will be much more beautiful.
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most people have an aim of their own life. In long term, a proper aim keeps a person shining in the future life. My aim is to help human by freeing them from sufferings caused by diseases. The journey require a lot of sacrifices, but I have confidence in me. During my first year at high school, I bear in mind my lifelong dream of become a doctor with admirable achievements. I have been taking my education seriously because I know that a person whom is eager to be successful has to be not only knowledgeable but also disciplining. Therefore, I work hard to earn of good grades and learn to manage my time reasonable.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as your classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.
I’m sure that there is still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”
