假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
On my fourteen birthday, I received lots of presents. Which present is the best in my eye? It’s hand-made notebook, that my best friend Jane gave to me. Jane makes it by herself. On each page of the notebook, there’s a picture for Jane and me with some words. She either encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship. Every time I look at the notebook, I’m touching by something warm. This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we’ve spent together. I will be keep this special gift forever.
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【推荐1】每句中最多有一处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
1. Today a number of people learning English in China is increasing rapidly.
2. He said the earth went around the sun.
3. It’s easy for you to advise, but difficult to take advices from others.
4. The boys which are talking with Tom are from class one.
5. I have seen most of the greatest buildings in the world which are famous on the Internet.
6. The plane is arrive in 10 minutes.
7. This is the first time that I has been to Guilin.
8. Our teacher insisted that we came to school on time every day.
9. I prefer to read books at home rather than to go shopping on Sundays.
10. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try is best to make the activities lively and interesting.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
1. Today a number of people learning English in China is increasing rapidly.
2. He said the earth went around the sun.
3. It’s easy for you to advise, but difficult to take advices from others.
4. The boys which are talking with Tom are from class one.
5. I have seen most of the greatest buildings in the world which are famous on the Internet.
6. The plane is arrive in 10 minutes.
7. This is the first time that I has been to Guilin.
8. Our teacher insisted that we came to school on time every day.
9. I prefer to read books at home rather than to go shopping on Sundays.
10. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try is best to make the activities lively and interesting.
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1. I'll be out for some time；in case of anything important happens，call me up immediately.
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2. In this section，we will briefly describe ways of reducing the risks involving in doing this.
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3. The meeting was so important that no teacher and no student was absence from it.
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4. He said that it was the privilege for him to help Rose.
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5. There are a lot of computers in the lab, and they need professional maintenance to make sure they can be at a good state.
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6. I am very happy to know you are in the charge of a teenager art exhibition next month.
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1. I'll be out for some time；in case of anything important happens，call me up immediately.
2. In this section，we will briefly describe ways of reducing the risks involving in doing this.
3. The meeting was so important that no teacher and no student was absence from it.
4. He said that it was the privilege for him to help Rose.
5. There are a lot of computers in the lab, and they need professional maintenance to make sure they can be at a good state.
6. I am very happy to know you are in the charge of a teenager art exhibition next month.
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【推荐3】下列各句中都有一处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，请按要求修改下列各句。错误改在原句上。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. We will visit the amazed new museum.
2. The English play was great success.
3. We visited a place that where is surrounded by mountains.
4. I showed my parents I was independent by wear strange clothes.
5. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. We will visit the amazed new museum.
2. The English play was great success.
3. We visited a place that where is surrounded by mountains.
4. I showed my parents I was independent by wear strange clothes.
5. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.
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【推荐1】请你修改以下的每个句子，每句有1处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
1. September is the nine month of the year.
2. How many time has your mother told you not to play computer games?
3. I left Hong Kong for Thailand on holiday with a friend of I yesterday.
4. I invite Jim to the party when I saw him last week.
5. Each of my classmates like listening to the music.
6. People in modern times generally live more longer than people in the past.
7. It is a quietly place which is good for reading.
8. There was a exciting soccer game on TV last night, but I missed it.
9. His daughter is good on drawing and has won many prizes.
10. Though Kate is only ten years old, but she can speak three languages very well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
1. September is the nine month of the year.
2. How many time has your mother told you not to play computer games?
3. I left Hong Kong for Thailand on holiday with a friend of I yesterday.
4. I invite Jim to the party when I saw him last week.
5. Each of my classmates like listening to the music.
6. People in modern times generally live more longer than people in the past.
7. It is a quietly place which is good for reading.
8. There was a exciting soccer game on TV last night, but I missed it.
9. His daughter is good on drawing and has won many prizes.
10. Though Kate is only ten years old, but she can speak three languages very well.
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【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改句子，请你修改你同桌写的以下句子。句中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
1. The project is now in charge of Mr. Green, our close friend.
2. Tom got up, dressed him and went to work in a hurry.
3. It's not doing the things we like，but liking the things we have to do which makes life happy.
4. Ignore the difference between the two research findings will be one of the worst mistakes you make.
5. In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons.
6. Before I getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank.
7. About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.
8. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.
9. Not until he went through real hardship did he realize the love we had for our families was important.
10. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
1. The project is now in charge of Mr. Green, our close friend.
2. Tom got up, dressed him and went to work in a hurry.
3. It's not doing the things we like，but liking the things we have to do which makes life happy.
4. Ignore the difference between the two research findings will be one of the worst mistakes you make.
5. In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons.
6. Before I getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank.
7. About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.
8. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.
9. Not until he went through real hardship did he realize the love we had for our families was important.
10. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
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The Mid-Autumn Festival fall on the 15th of the eight month in Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoyed great popularity in our country. Usual, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come to home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brighter in the whole lunar month. That we love most is the moment when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in night sky, we sit together, eating mooncakes and fruit and sharing their stories. In addition to these traditional activity, we have a variety of choices such as travelling or visiting our relatives or friends.
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【推荐1】以下每个句子只有一处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. Gone through a miserable childhood, he lives a happy life now.
2. To be frankly, I don’t know what you said just now.
3. In our daily life, we should have a balance life.
4. The magician must keep people from noticing the secret of his equipments.
5. Although many years have passed, the small town still has many of its origin buildings.
6. Many measures should be taken to protect cultural relics from dying off.
7. In average, people who don’t smoke are healthier than people who do.
8. Only at that time did I knew I was wrong.
9. I’ve read many books, in which I benefit a lot.
10. Apart the school, the village has a clinic and many small shops.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. Gone through a miserable childhood, he lives a happy life now.
2. To be frankly, I don’t know what you said just now.
3. In our daily life, we should have a balance life.
4. The magician must keep people from noticing the secret of his equipments.
5. Although many years have passed, the small town still has many of its origin buildings.
6. Many measures should be taken to protect cultural relics from dying off.
7. In average, people who don’t smoke are healthier than people who do.
8. Only at that time did I knew I was wrong.
9. I’ve read many books, in which I benefit a lot.
10. Apart the school, the village has a clinic and many small shops.
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1. Sixteen-years-old Zhang Hua lives in the city of Guangzhou.
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2. As we all know, paper is made of wood.
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3. It was six years since we last saw each other.
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4. I am proud of our school and feel fortunately to be admitted as one of its students.
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5. Sounded great！ Let's go and enjoy the wonderful view there！
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6. Can you write three or four sentences described your hometown?
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1. Sixteen-years-old Zhang Hua lives in the city of Guangzhou.
2. As we all know, paper is made of wood.
3. It was six years since we last saw each other.
4. I am proud of our school and feel fortunately to be admitted as one of its students.
5. Sounded great！ Let's go and enjoy the wonderful view there！
6. Can you write three or four sentences described your hometown?
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1. To my satisfying, he could be so calm at such a time.
2. Only a person with determine is likely to succeed.
3. The cross-sea bridge measured 1,500 meters is really a wonder.
4. Eventual, she stepped out of the forest and reached home.
5. Turning to classmates can be benefit to release your pressure.
6. Regular exercise helps patients recovery from operation.
7. We are doing our best with the limit resources.
8. Keep in mind that your concentrate on class plays a key role in study!
1. To my satisfying, he could be so calm at such a time.
2. Only a person with determine is likely to succeed.
3. The cross-sea bridge measured 1,500 meters is really a wonder.
4. Eventual, she stepped out of the forest and reached home.
5. Turning to classmates can be benefit to release your pressure.
6. Regular exercise helps patients recovery from operation.
7. We are doing our best with the limit resources.
8. Keep in mind that your concentrate on class plays a key role in study!
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1. My father, that is an excellent violinist , is leaving for Canada for performances.
2. Which is known to all, the moon travels round the earth once every month.
3. Paper money has used for over a thousand years.
4. Look, the bridge is been built.
5. If I was given enough time, I’ll go to Japan for my holiday.
1. My father, that is an excellent violinist , is leaving for Canada for performances.
2. Which is known to all, the moon travels round the earth once every month.
3. Paper money has used for over a thousand years.
4. Look, the bridge is been built.
5. If I was given enough time, I’ll go to Japan for my holiday.
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【推荐2】请你修改以下的每个句子，每句有1处语言错误。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
1. What great the change was!
2. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as requiring.
3. Only then I’m honest and reliable will I be trusted with others.
4. The room had been booked previously so it was no need to deal with this problem.
5. When interviewing by the school TV station，I expressed my pride in our splendid culture.
6. They are many after-school activities in my school.
7. Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life.
8. There will have an English speech contest next week, which I plan to get involved in.
9. Apart from these reasons, there is even some students who complain that they can’t afford sports facilities.
10. There is a Chinese saying goes like this：Traveling ten thousand li is better than reading ten thousand books.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
1. What great the change was!
2. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as requiring.
3. Only then I’m honest and reliable will I be trusted with others.
4. The room had been booked previously so it was no need to deal with this problem.
5. When interviewing by the school TV station，I expressed my pride in our splendid culture.
6. They are many after-school activities in my school.
7. Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life.
8. There will have an English speech contest next week, which I plan to get involved in.
9. Apart from these reasons, there is even some students who complain that they can’t afford sports facilities.
10. There is a Chinese saying goes like this：Traveling ten thousand li is better than reading ten thousand books.
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1. He usually got up at six in the morning，but he slept until ten this morning.
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2. If we won't act to protect the environment，we'll regret it.
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3. The teacher explained to us that the earth moved round the sun.
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4. Ken gave Mary an embarrassing smile when he stepped on her foot accidentally.
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5. The new company has made an encouraged start in this field.
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6. I'm tiring of doing my homework；let's go for a walk.
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7. They are living with their parents for the moment because their own house is repaired.
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8. It's really an amazed dance. It always brings the house down.
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1. He usually got up at six in the morning，but he slept until ten this morning.
2. If we won't act to protect the environment，we'll regret it.
3. The teacher explained to us that the earth moved round the sun.
4. Ken gave Mary an embarrassing smile when he stepped on her foot accidentally.
5. The new company has made an encouraged start in this field.
6. I'm tiring of doing my homework；let's go for a walk.
7. They are living with their parents for the moment because their own house is repaired.
8. It's really an amazed dance. It always brings the house down.
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