增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, walking is a good way of exercising and is benefit to our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also builds up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without considering rules. Beside, walking can also help us lose weight. How should we pay attention to during the walk? First, we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so that you can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to cause us breathe with difficulty but still be able to talk about. Third, it’s huge important to walk with our two arm moving freely. Most importantly, we should do it every day.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know it, health is very important to us students. Here are some tips on how to grow up healthily.
Some students at school were too addicted to phones and computers, which does harm to their health. Therefore, you are strong advised to rid you of them. In addition, sparing some time to build up your body on a regular basis to make you energetic and relaxing. Above all, attach great importance on making friends and communicating with others. Taking active part in various voluntary activities can also be of great beneficial.
I hope that the suggestion above will make a difference.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My school ends at 2:30 pm. Then we can join in a wide range of activity. In my school, there are many clubs for students to take part in. I used to lie on the couch comfortable eating chips and watching TV until I joined the running club. Now, I would rather running hard for an hour every day. It is running which helps me lose weight, which provide great health benefits. Now I'm much more healthier than before. I am advised to keep going and I will be a couch potato again! Besides, either good grades and involvement in after-school clubs highly valued when we apply for college. Joining clubs is on great significance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the past two years, a growing number ot students felt stressed out. Some even suffered from depression and that they had nobody to turn to. Fortunate, our school set up the Soul House, aiming at relieving student’s pressure and ensuring their health. It opened from 5:40 p.m. to 6:40 p.m. at weekdays. A psychologist is on duty in the room which provides psychological expertise and guidance for students. Beside, he also helps students resolve our mental health issues. As its name suggests, “Soul House” has become a place of peace for our souls and played a important role in our mental health.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mother is a teacher work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my mother’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
As we all know, walking is a good way of exercising and is beneficial of our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kind of diseases but also builds up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without consider rules. Beside, walking can also help us lose weight. What should we pay attention during the walk? First, we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so as that we can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficult but still be able to talk. Third, it’s huge important to walk with our arms moving freely. Most importantly, we should do it every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
According to the World Health Organization, 81% of teenagers are lacked in exercise. The result of the survey sounds reasonable. They may seem surprising, though.
Some of us think exercising is a waste of time when having many homework in high school. Others prefer phones to sports. Apart from these reasons, there is even some students who complain that they can’t afford sports facilities.
However, doing regular exercises can strengthen our body but make us energetic. It is also beneficial as it helped to remove pressure once in while. Therefore, my fellow friends, remember to stretch out ourselves every day at intervals of studies. More important, do stick with the workout.
As teenagers, we all expect for healthy bodies and a high quality of life. Let’s exercise together from then on!
