增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known to us, the fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, what makes them weak and easily tired. There is many reasons for this. First of all, some of the students complain that they have too many homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. Beside, some of them think that it is very difficulty for them to keep doing exercise. Many student are in poor health because they lack physical activities. I suggest that their school should take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter how busily we are, it is necessary spare some time to do exercise.
I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made a lot of friend and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our school organizes football matches in every year. Some students are willing take part but they were worried that they don’t have enough time. I want to share some of my idea here. There is no doubt that joining in the matches take up some study time. Therefore, they can bring some benefits like those sporting activities hold before. They can lead to a healthier body, less stress, and more actively thinking. Students can not only live the happy life but also perform well at school. I hope we can make right decisions for us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I started school, I am weak and often caught a cold. I often asked for leave because of illness, which influenced my studies. So I decided to change so a bad situation. Since junior high school, I have made running a form of exercise build up my body. The long-distance running has not only made me health, but improved your running skills.
When I entered on high school, I was choosing as a school athlete. I took part in a number of sports competition when I was free but got good results. Running has changed my life. The decision that I should go running whenever I have time have brought me a lot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What is the difference between a good athlete and a great one?
A sports psychologist suggests there are three things that all great athletes have on common. First, they were not afraid to compete other people. Second, great athletes are those which are positive about them and their abilities. Great athletes know that how to deal with stress. They are unable to cut out things in daily life that adds to their stress, such as unhealthy food or bad friendships. Finally, great athletes have the mental strength to focus on which is the most important.
Great athletes set a example to us not only in how to play sports well but also in how to live well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As it is known to us, fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, what makes them weak and easily tired. There are many reasons about this. First of all, some of the students complain that they have too many homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. Beside, some of them think that it is very difficulty for them to keep doing exercise. Many students are in poor health because we lack physical activities. I suggest that our school should take measure to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter what busy we are, it is necessary spare some time to do exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I became interesting in playing football because a small accident. At that time, I was in primary school. One afternoon which I was walking by the school playground, suddenly, a football fell just in the front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. I was persuaded to join them. From now on, I started to play football with classmates after school. Now, I am a member of our school football team.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
I started running at a early age, as both of my parents ran, and they encouraged me join them. I started by go a fifteen-minute run through the park close to that I lived. I usual ran in the mornings because of it meant that I got my daily exercise done early and had the rest of the day to do what I wanted to do. Six months ago, I took part for a big race, a run to raise money to help homeless people. I manage to come within the top ten runner out of thousands of people. I felt such proud to have completed it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sun Yang is known for a famous Chinese swimmer. Born in 1991, he is 1.98 meters in height and 89 kilos in weight. As swimmer, he always trains hardly. That’s why he could win two gold medal in the 2012 London Olympics, which were a great honor for our country. Although he once makes mistakes in the view of the public, but in the 2013 World Swimming Championships he made amazed achievements. Sun Yang is very brilliant that he has many fans. We should be pleased to take her as our role model.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Hi Chris
I think going to a gym is a good way to keep health and strong. If your friend wants to be stronger, and he should try to go there more often.
Yes, there have some pills to make you look strong. Therefore, they have side effects, that will damage your health. After your friend taking this kind of pill for some time, his hair might fell out or he might have health problems, some of which may even affect her liver or heart. Some athlete, whose achievements were great, died very young because they take this kind of pill. I don’t think your friend should take the risk .
Tell your friend not take the pills because he may have health problems in the future, when it is too late.
Jeff
