增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, I’m John Smith. Now I want tell you something about my after-work activity. I guess they’re not quite different from your. I’m interested in sports. I run about miles on everyday for good health. When I’m running, I always thought about all sorts of things. And at the end of a run, I’m sometimes surprising to find that I have managed to solve the problem what was on my mind. Next year, I’m going to ran a Marathon. It is a hardly and long race and I want to do it very much.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
Hear the news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. At the beginning, it was extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give up while my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Chris,
I have a good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and win an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join your team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in win the award and also promote the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about that I wish to get your advice because you are much experienced than us. We sincere hope that we can participate in the competition as team partner.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
增加:把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The mascot(吉祥物) of the 2022 Winter Olympic Games official made its public appearance on Tuesday. It was a cartoon character inspired by giant pandas. The smiling panda is named with Bing DwenDwen in Chinese. Color circles around its face symbolize skating tracks and 5G technology. Bing, Chinese word for “ice”, shows purity and strength, but DwenDwen means sincerity, liveliness and health — also characteristics of pandas. Perhaps pandas are the animals most easily recognizing by us in China. The mascot combines our traditional culture and how pandas look like with winter sports elements. The image shows our great expect of the Games and that our Chinese welcome the world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Healthy eating along with regular exercise are probably the only way become fit. If we eat healthy or exercise regularly, we will lose weight, keep fit and feel great.
As a teenager, it is important to have a balanced diet because we need enough nutritions to grow tall and strong. So we should not be particular with food. Take exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help you keep fit and release stress.
More important, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter which happens. Even if we are in a difficult situation, we should never lose a hope.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have many interests and hobbies, such as play basketball, volleyball, and tennis, collecting stamps, climbing, going hiking but so on. Among them, basketball is his favorite and I often spend much hours shooting baskets. I play in Saturday mornings fairly regularly with a group of guy, but the game is not very formal. We don’t keep score and “no blood” is first rule. I had never been a star player. I usual disappear when I’m in a game. It means that I can make all sorts of long shots when that I’m shooting without a defender. However, in a game I’m not much of a scoring threat.
书写示例:改词:例如 if→unless;删词:例如 去掉that;加词:例如 live∧in (注: live 为原文,in 为加的词)
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We had a family meeting last summer, and it’s topic was health and exercise. My father first stressed that exercise was beneficial our health. Then he suggested that the members which belong to my family exercised as much as possible for our health . After a warm discussion, we each choose a sport we liked and promised to work out regular.
Now, my mother spends her evenings in the square dance to music.My father goes jogging every morning because of the fresh airs. As for me, I like cycling, so I usually go to school by the bike.We are all stronger but more energetic than before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的同用抖线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My favorite sport is playing ping-pong. I had been playing ping-pong ever from I was young. I began to play ping-pong at age of five. Now I can play it quite well. When watch or playing ping-pong, I feel so greatly! Though with a round ball and small bats, it practises quick reaction or decision. Sometimes I would rather to play doubles because we can practised teamwork as well. There are a lot of ping-pong table in our school and in our neighborhood. My friends and I often play together in my spare time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Aug. 21, I was writing a composition titling “My Hero/Heroine”. I stuck at the beginning, trying to find out what would be my hero/heroine.
Attracted by the cheers from the living room, I opened the door only to find my parents were watching the volleyball matches of women’s final. Then I decided to take the break and joined in them. The score was quite closely between China and its opponent.
To our delight, China won in the end. We couldn’t help feel proud as Chinese! The volleyball players had trained so hard before and fight till the last minute. Without doubt, they were not only my heroines, and the heroines of China! I started to write my composition.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was so proud that I heard my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feeling like I could achieve anything. Only three years before, I was terrified of walking or skating on ice. To deal with this, I decided to join skating club. My teacher was great but before I knew it, I was able to skate. He then persuades me to try ice hockey. I loved it and was soon practising with my local team on almost every evening. We’re now training hardly for national competitions and hope to be champion one day, but his ultimate goal is to be an ice hockey teacher and help people learn to play this game.