增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
Glad to know if you are coming here this weekend, I’d like to introduce Gulangyu Island for you to visit it.
The island features many wonderfully aspects. First, there were many tourist attractions, like the Sunshine Rock and Shuzhuang Garden. When stood on the top of the Sunshine Rock, the highest point in this area, you can saw the island clearly. With many well-known musician born there, it was named “the Island of Music” in 2022.
However, you have to facing the problems of heavy traffic or large crowds of people during the weekends and public holidays. For these reasons, you’d better choose a proper time to pay visit to it.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I started volunteering at a young age and continue to do so in our spare time. I am frequently visit nursing homes to help an elderly. It is a memorable experience to clean up the trash but chat with them. In my opinion, volunteering have many benefits. First of all, it can help create meaningfully relationships with others and increase our social interaction. Secondly, volunteering can raise awareness of the very issues what other people deal with and will increase important social skills such as teamwork. Last but not least, volunteering has been shown to give you a sense of accomplish and to increase feelings of happiness. And I believe you can gains a lot from your volunteer journey!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One evening, a bus with 45 people had a accident because of the icy road and all of the passenger were trapped in the bus. Unfortunately, the bus ran out gas and the door was locked down. It was becoming more colder and colder in the bus. The driver could do nothing and wait for help.
A man who lived nearby realized that had happened. He managed to open the door and helped all of the people out of the bus. He takes them to his home and offered them food, water and found warm clothes for the frightening children. They spent six hours in his home until officially help came and they was very grateful for his help.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I had a family visit in Xi’an, the old city with a long history in China. We tasted the true home-cooked dishes in the home in which we visited. For in-homing dinner, the host would prepare a list of menus by advance. Our tour guide asked for advices about the food, so the host would try to cook what we choose to eat at his home. We real enjoyed the locally cooked dishes. What’s more, the host taught us what to make dumplings step by step. Though dumplings created with badly dressed appearance, we felt happy to enjoy the fruits of our labor. The family visit in Xi’an was a good chance for them to know Chinese people’s daily lifestyles and it was a lot more excited than we had expected.
What would life like without music? I wonder how music started and when we first become interested in music. Music is a essential part of my day. It changes my feelings and put me in a good mood. There’s nothing good to do on a train or bus than put on my headphones to listen to my favorite music. I like all types of music, from classical music and opera for jazz and rock. I’m always looking for something that sounds amazed. Sometimes I hear a song or some music on the radio or on TV I enjoy it very much. I always use my pockets money to pay online to download and saving the music.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom.
How are you doing! I am writing to invite you visit the new museum in ours city with me this Sunday morning. The museum, which opens last month, is said to be great and real worth visiting. We will meet at 7 o’clock at a school gate. Then we will take No. 7 bus and it will take the bus 45 minute to take us there. There are many valuable pictures, paintings and sculptures on display in the museum, showed the long and colorfully history of our city. I am sure we will learn a lot of more about the history of our city and have a good time. If you are free and interesting, please get ready ahead of time and join me.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I live in a small town and in general, there is not many traffic on the roads. So I rare get stuck in traffic jams. Besides, I met heavy traffic last month when I went to Ludhiana to buy some clothes for my cousin wedding. When we start, there was no traffic. On the way back, the man road was shut down because of there had been a crash between two buses. Bigger cranes (起重机) had to been called to remove the buses from the roads and that took time. We stuck in the jam for at least 2 to 3 hours. So they tried to kill the time by playing games and listening to music.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, my family and me spent the whole holiday on an amazed island in Hainan Province. The island is very big and there are lots of things to see and do. We stay in a comfortable hotel and went swimming every day because the beautiful weather. We also tried the local food. There were the number of traditional restaurants on the island, and we ate there every evening! To my surprises, I put on about three kilos during the holiday, when I didn’t really like. We also visited many interesting sights, and like the local museum that I found very impressively. We had a great time there and I’d really love to going there again someday!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起)不计分。
Many people have noticed that deliver time has shortened in recent years. Technology contributes a lot more to such improvements. When a truck full of parcels arrive at a sorting point, workers first put the parcels in the baskets on the automatic sorting machine where classifies them. Then packages are scanned and automatic sorted according to the receivers addresses. Only 10 workers are needed for a truck of parcels but it can be finished within 30 minutes. Apart from sorting, more unmanned stations have put to use to make pickup faster. Users can locate their parcels using a number texting to them, and a process never requires any staff.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my father wanted to make breakfast for we. He got all the things prepare in the kitchen. The recipe he chose looked easily, with a picture of a delicious breakfast. He followed the recipe and waited with patient. However, instead of the delicious breakfast he hoped for, it was turned out to be a total mess. He try to fix it. To his disappointment, he didn’t success. As a result, we went to a restaurant but had a delicious meal. There, we all had great time together, creating memories whose would last a lifetime.
