增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This summer holiday I went to Gansu with my friends. We were very excited because our one stop was the Mogao Caves. Attracting by the wonderful desert around the Caves, we took a lot of pictures on our arrive. Once in the Caves, the guide introduced the wall paintings to me in vivid details. We listened attentively and asked much questions and took a lot of notes.
Ride camels along the Silk Road was another exciting things during our trip. On the Camel’s back I couldn’t help wondering the ancient businessmen felt lonely along the wild Silk Road. In the end, we took a group photo and to memorize the visit.
The summer holiday is over now, but I still wanted to see more sites along the Silk Road.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After supper, Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside cry. We bring her a cake to stop her crying. But when we asked where she had lived, she said she did not know. So we took her to the police station and asked the police to take care for her. After this, we went to the cinema, but when we got there, the movie was near at its end. Though we missed the movie, we did a good deed. We felt very happily.
