Jonny likes read in bed. It is bad for his eyes and now he is near-sighted. He doesn’t like everybody else to know about it, or he never wears glasses, which often brings him some trouble. One cold winter morning he is going to school. He got off the bus in a stop in a small town where the school was. The bus stop was just opposite school across the street.
When he was cross the street, he nearly got hit by a car because he didn’t see the traffic lights clear. When he got to the school gate, the wind begins to blow. Suddenly, it blew his hat off. He began to run after it so he couldn’t get it. He couldn’t understand why his hat ran down into a house as if it had leg. And he ran into the house, too. A woman stopped him and shouted angrily, “Why are you running after my hen for?”
Now he knew he really could wear a pair of glasses. It is very important to see things clearly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I have free time I go a long walk. Some people read the books or watch television while others have sports.
Charles and Linda Mason do all of these things as well as climbed buildings. In the last five years that they have climbed churches, high buildings and television towers. They have climbed all over the world. Charles said, “as soon as I see a real tall building, I want to climb it. We climb everywhere, not only in America. They have been to Europe many time. ” Two months ago they were back in America. Last Sunday Police cars hurried to the taller building in New York, which a large crowd had gathered. Charles and Linda were seen near the top of the building. When they came down the police were angry to them. One police officer said to them. “Buildings have elevators (电梯), don’t they? Why don’t you use them?”
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Anne’s sister Margot was very upset about that the family had to move. However, she knew that she had got to go through all the difficulties for her family. She found it difficult to settle and calm up in the hiding place, because she was concern about whether they would be discovered. She suffered from lonely, but she had to learn to like there. What he really missed was going outdoors and walking the dog for her neighbour. It was such fun watch it run loose in the park. She wished she could tell her neighbour face to face if she was sorry not to be able to do it any longer, but she know that was too dangerous!
Is it necessary to practise handwriting? Some students consider handwriting least important than before. They preferred the keyboard to the pen now, for the former is fast, convenient and clear. They think it is waste of time practising handwriting. However, others think Chinese handwriting is an important part of our traditional culture.
Though computers are very convenient, but handwriting still plays an important role in the modern world. Beside, beautiful handwriting makes a good impression in others. It shows your attitude to do things. Chinese character are very beautiful and rich in culture. As for me, when reading a neatly writing article, you will feel pleased and relaxed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Isaac Asimov was a American scientist and writer. He wrote around 480 books where included mystery stories, science and history books. But he was better known for his science fiction stories. He had an extraordinarily imagination. It gives him the ability to explore future worlds. Besides, he searched explanations of everything, in the present and the past, with an amazed mind.
Throughout his life, Asimov received much awards. He was married two. He married his first wife in 1942 and married again in 1973. In 1992, she died in New York.
Five years ago, my father, who was in his forty, lost Ms job. At first, he was in low spirits and often gets drunk. One day, he read a story about Ren zhengfei, which was greatly inspired him. He turned to a friend, with which help he set up a factory. In his factory waste materials were made full use to produce environmentally friendly packing bags. With these bags well receiving, his factory went smooth. Now, he has extra money because he often helps those in need. So far, he has donated as many as $10,000. How a great father I have!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m worried that you have been addicted sharing pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sorts of photo in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes it the better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, that is very convenient for us to communicate. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is give away privacy, which may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can makes others uncomfortable, for they think you are showing off. Thus, never should we post our personal informations, or should we blind add strangers to the list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such like reading books or taking exercise.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend who’s name is Han Meimei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. His neighbor was very thankful for her help.
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:再错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
When I was young I want to become a traveler, so I really liked reading books which were introduced Many countries. They are so many places where I want to go, but if I must choose only one place, my choose is Morocco. There are three reasons why the Morocco is my favorite place. Firstly, Morocco is country in North African. I have never been to African, and I think there are many mysteries on this land than Asia or Europe. Secondly, Morocco is a famous place where many movies was made, such as ‘Casablanca’. Morocco had many nice places for sightseeing. Lastly, Morocco is much developing in business. I like all developed cities, besides they are always full of life. When I think over Casablanca or New York or other cities like them, I just feel very excitedly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As some of these actors could not sing well enough, they had to rely on other musicians to help them. So during the broadcasts they just pretended to singing. Anyhow their performances were humor enough to be copied by other groups. They were so popular that its fans formed clubs in order get more familiar with them. Each week on TV, the Monkees would play but sing songs written by other musicians. However, after a year or so in which they became more serious about their work, the Monkees start to play and sing their own songs like a really band. Then they produced out their own records and began touring and playing their own music. In a USA they became even more popular than the Beatles and sold even more record.