每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写。
As a fan of sports, I am eagerly to expose me to various sports-related activities. Take part in World Middle School Games is so a golden opportunity to meet the outstanding teenagers worldwide that I really don't want to miss it. In addition to, the voluntary service will offer a precious chance to contributing to our society.
I believe the good command of English ensures that I can communicate with the foreign athletes effective. Moreover, with my love and knowledges for sports as well as Chinese history and culture. I can fulfill my role not only as a volunteer also as a cultural ambassador to spread Chinese culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We have a small piece of land to grow vegetables, that are growing better than ever. Today, my mother picked a lot of vegetables and asked me to send any to one of her colleagues, whom I call Auntie. She was very happily. She liked the fresh vegetables very much and said thank to me. She also sent his regards to my mother.
After supper, I was about to doing my homework when I heard a knock at the door. When I open the door, I saw Auntie standing outside with many gifts are in her hands. I knew immediately that she came thank us for the vegetables. What a thoughtful or kind woman!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am David. As a eighteen-year-old student in Senior 3, there have always a new challenge just around the corner! At times they can be quite stressful, which in turn makes me feel very worry. In order to help deal this, I go jogging as often as possibly. Whether I’m at the gym and on the road, my nervous energy push me through mile one. By mile two, the tension has moved from my mind to my leg. By the end of the run, all my stress has been disappeared and I am ready to meet more challenges with confidence the next day!
Dear Mike,
How are you？I am so glad to tell you anything about the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a traditional festival with a long history in China. It is of very popular and is also celebrated in much other Asian countries. The festival fell on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar or is celebrated in different ways. It is a time to get together with family and friends. People usually have a get-together, enjoy a large meal. In the evening, people talk and eat moon cakes under the beautiful moon. Children prefer to listen to fairy tales while adults appreciate bright full moon in the open air. The moon is a symbol of reunion, lucky and wealth. It is also a custom to express best wish to people they love at this particularly time.
Welcome to China to enjoy this festival with us one day.
Yours,
Zhang Feng
Almost all parents in China hope their son or daughter will have happy future. They are very strict with their children, and so is teachers in schools! Many children are given so much homework which they hardly have any spare time to do sports. The children are forbidding to do anything but study it. It is no wonder that there’re so many children tiring of their lessons. Some even attack their parents or teachers! I strong believe many people had already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw a lesson from the accident? Now our government is carrying on a plan to solve the education problems. Therefore, let’s work together.
Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards it may make difference. I still remember how my spoken English was improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes. Before long my teacher got to know about his situation, he encouraged me to speak out that I thought. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging, my teacher and my classmate would help me to find out my problem. I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak. Practice makes perfect. Now I can talk fluent in English. Just as the saying went, “Every bean has its black.”Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Learning from mistakes, and success is just waiting for us.
I like the Spring Festival, during that I usually enjoy myself greatly. All the family member often get together to have a big dinner. We also visit our relatives or friends. To my great joy, my grandparents always gave me some lucky money. Last year, I spent the Spring Festival happily as usual, but one thing made me surprising. My grandparents didn’t give me lucky money at first! It seemed that they had forgotten about them. Seeing I was puzzled, my grandpa laughed at. Several minutes late, my mobile phone received message. It was my grandpa who sent lucky money to me secret through WeChat! How cool and humorous my grandpa was!
As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicted to their phones, complete ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomena in our life. The reason is why phones nowadays can be used by people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involving in phones fail to communicate well with those around us.
As far as I concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile, they should also care more about their family and friends rather than phones.
It is well known that one of the aims of UNESCO is to protect and preserve culture and natural heritage. Our heritage is the precious gift, and it is also that we live with today. I believed some of you may have visited Mount Tai and Mount Huang, or have been to Jiuzhaigou. Many people just find unbelievable that so beautiful places exist in this world.
These heritage site impress visitors with their amazed beauty, and they are a great source of inspiration. There are altogether more than over 900 World Heritage Sites. People have come to understanding the truth that they do not belong to any single person, and to all mankind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’d like to share with you what has happened to the transportation in our city.
Firstly, great changes have been taken place to the transportation inside the city, which makes it convenient for citizens to get around. Some narrowly streets have been broadened, but there are less traffic jams. Secondly, transportation to other cities had also improved. Several highways are now on construction. Two high-speed railways connected our city to the national high-speed railway web is close to completion. At that time, the travel time to Beijing will be reduced to three hour. What deserves to be mentioned is that a airport has been in use for several years, making your city more and more popular.
