增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took it seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be fully prepared. And the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blankly. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like a battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks to her advice, I never give up when I do anything.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear that you are going to Canada to study. So I was writing to tell you anything about this country. Locating in North America, Canada is the second large country with the largest number of lakes in the world. The majority of people lives in the center of the country. However, I suggest that you should chose to study in the east, because there are many international students there and the tuition is lower. During you study you can take the part in more activities after class, where you can make more friends from different country. In this way, your life will rich and colorful.
Hope you will have a wonderful life there.
Yours,
Li Ming
3 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This is a true story what happened last year. One day, my uncle invited a old professor to supper. During the evening, it rained very hardly. Because of the professor walked to my uncle’s, my uncle advised him stay overnight. The professor agreed and thanks my uncle politely, and while my uncle was washing the dishes, the professor disappeared. My uncle couldn’t found him anywhere. However, the front door bell rang after 40 minute. It was the professor. Her clothes were wet through. He said that he had gone home to get his toothbrush.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to the zoo with Lily on yesterday. There was lots of people there. I found a girl crying in the zoo. She was lost and she couldn’t found her mother. We decided to helping her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. At the same time Lily played with the little girl but looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last her mother came, that made me feel very happy. I thought I really did a well thing. Unless everyone helps each other, the world will become more beautiful.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处。
Humor is not only considered as one of the most valuable quality, but necessary for a delightful life. You can clear sense humor when staying with Joe. He is kind but overweight, who brings him much trouble. Once after class, one classmate asked for him why he was so fat. Both of us stopped to stare at him, wonder how he would answer the question. He said with a calm voice. “Well, because my size must large enough to hold my large heart of love.” Hearing his words, we burst into laughter. Not only did Joe took the joke, but he managed to deal with the embarrassed situation.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend who’s name is Han Meimei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. His neighbor was very thankful for her help.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m writing to reply to you. In your last letter, you ask me how to learn ancient Chinese poems. Since you are such interested in poems, I’d like to share my opinions for you. First of all, reading them repeatedly. This can help you well understand that the poets want to convey. As the old Chinese saying goes, “Read a hundred times, the meaning will appear.” Besides, you should know some background informations about them, such as the author and the historical period. Finally, I suggest I recite some poems, which can make you to enjoy the beautiful rhymes and beats of the poems. I am always willingly to offer help if you have any questions.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandparents live in a small mountain village, in that there are many trees grew well, including several walnut trees. Every year my grandparents gave me walnuts and last year Grandpa told me with a sadly look on his face that he had no walnuts. I asked why. He said the squirrels lad eaten both the walnuts. I was very surprised, because we had never had squirrels there ago. Grandpa sad probably the squirrels had brought from the south. He said he wouldn’t let them get away with then bad deeds. I try to persuade Grandpa not to hurt the lovely squirrels, promising I would rather not to eat walnuts. Grandpa agreed to his request.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a lively discussion was held in my class last Friday. It was main about protecting the fine Chinese culture. Some suggest raising people’s awareness of preserving our culture and make people fall in love with it. For example, we could conduct creative activity like discovery tours and culture shows to help people have better understand of our culture. Others thought some courses should be offered in schools, whose goal was to help students learn more about their customs, ways of life and so on. And to my view, which mattered was that everyone should feel proud of our own culture. Beside, we should attempt to pass our fine culture down from generation to generation.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(—),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father is knowledgeable, because he can always give me advices and help me make the best decision. Having graduated college, he landed a job in a company, but soon he felt boring to sit in the office all day long. My grandfather suggested that he thought carefully what he really wanted. Therefore, my father quit to travel across China, hope to find the answer during the trip. When he arrived at a mountainous village, and he was shocked to find there was a urgent need for teachers. How he saw in local children’s eyes—eagerness to acquire knowledge— moved them, so he decided to settle down and teach them. Now, he had students all over the country.