Dear Li Ming，
The summer holiday is around corner. Do you have any plan for them？I plan to read some English book during the holiday and I needed your recommendations.
Firstly, I want to improve my English level, hope one day I can go to abroad for further study in other countries, such as America and England. Secondly, I also desires to know more history, geography as good as cultures and traditions about these countries. But can you make a list of the books of me to read？Thank you sincerely in advance.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My neighbor had a daughter named Emily, which was always playing with her friends and passing the time by sit at a computer. She was always thinking she was a genius in their studies. Although both of her parent kept persuading her to study, but she didn’t even listen to them. One day, her math teacher asks her a question in class. She was not able to answer it as she never practiced at home. Her classmates were all surprising that she didn’t give an answer to such simple question. She stood in silent and felt ashamed. From then on, she started studying hardly and she finally made great progress.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。
Han Gan was born into a poor family in the early Tang Dynasty. One day, he was sent to Wang Wei's house to collect payment. When discovered Han Gan's artistic talent, Wang Wei decided to sponsor the young man to study painting and recommend him to a master. To learn horse painting, he even moved in to live with the stable workers for quite some time. He spent too much time observing these animals that he could present every detail that he saw with his own eye. Today, he is known as his skill in capturing not only the physical features of the animal, but also its inner spirit and strength.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（
）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was very young, I was always told by my mom not to wasting food. She did really well at saving food. For example, she often made a list of what we would eat in a whole weeks ahead of time and bought fresh vegetables every day. She always said, “Store of more. Waste more.” Usual we could finish all the food, but sometimes there was some food left. At that time, my mom would put it into the refrigerator.
Now I am growing up and has to eat in the school dining hall. Influencing by her, I just take as much I need and never waste food. And I was trying to influence more people around mine.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am glad that you’ll come to our school and teach us oral English. I am eagerly to improve my spoken English. But I hope in class we’ll have a lot of chance to speak English. I think our English class must be lovely and interested.
Besides, I preferred to learn more about American culture. So if you show to us some pictures or films about American society and life, I believe all of them will like it. At same time, I find American idioms are difficulty to understand. Will you explain some of them to us?
Looking forward to learn English with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Many of us know the important of saving water. And we are now wasting a large amount of water in our daily life. About 70% of the water was used in a family every day can be saved if we follow the tip below.
First, use recycled water. Second, when you are taking a bath, turn off the tap a little bit. Remember to shut it off in time if you are not using them. Third, when you are washing dishes, use some pieces of paper to cleaning them first, and then use water to wash them, which will save many water. Only when everyone takes active part can we really save our limiting water resources.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago, I was addicted for computer games. I played with games day and night on weekends. I lost interesting in my studies and I was often absent from school.
My parents got very worrying about me. They persuaded me to quit play games, but I wouldn’t give up my bad habit. Later my English teacher gave me some advices on how to quit the bad Habit. Listing the disadvantages of playing computer games on a piece of paper, I put them on my bed and tried to remember them. Beside the list were my effective schedule. I followed my schedule strictly and managed to get rid playing games. After that I became active in studying and turn out to be one of the top students in our school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Don’t you wish summer vacation could go on forever? I sure do. Whenever I think about going back to school, I feel depressing. The thought of waking up early and listening to teachers drone on and on make me want to cry! This year, my school begins on late August. During summer vacation, I never run into my classmates. But I can count on doing so at a office supply store the day before school starts. The school usually gives us a list of supplies that we need them for the year. For me, a couple of notebooks and some pencils are needing. The mall is another place I am likely see my classmates. Most students in America don’t wear uniforms, so a new outfit for the first day of school was vital. Overall, back-to-school shopping doesn’t have to cost too many. From kindergarten through high school, students don’t need to purchase textbooks because schools provide it. Even though I’m not looking forward going back to school, at least I’m ready.
