删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone. We’re senior three students now, and it’s time that every one of us starts considering what to do after our graduation. As the rapid development of our society, there are more and more jobs to choose from. But which one suits us better? Some jobs may seem dull and they are vital to our society while other might appear exciting but actually they are different and bored, and sometimes cause huge pressure to those which are involved in them. As result, when we think about future career, we should realize the important of all jobs. Please remember they together to help our society function well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school decides to organize a project called “Vegetable Garden” days ago. Designing to raise our awareness of labor and give us a chance to get close to the nature, the project is meaningful. All classes are ready to active participate in the project. Each class will be given a piece of land, in what we can plant tomatoes, carrots and so on. We will water it every few days for them to grow well. In addition, it’s greatly importance to record vegetables’ growth. Best of all, we will taste the fresh food produced with our own hand. Every one of us are really looking forward to going our own land.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Since I was little, I’ve been larger than other girl. I hated a way I looked. My anxiety drives me to try every means to lose weight, dieting and weight-loss pills including. This only brought me pain and poor health. Everything changed the moment when I came across the story a plus-size model, Tess Holliday. Although she’s larger than most other models, she has the confidence to be her. Her story has changed my ideas about that it means to be beautiful. My health, mentally and physical, is the most important thing. Isn’t it better that I’m large and happy, instead of skinny and healthy?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
By the time Tom graduated from Yale University, he has undertaken a part-time job for 3 years, from that he accumulated abundant experience. However, he was much cast down by his failure to find a satisfying job. It occur to him that he should apply to the position provide by that large company. A great many applicant participated in the interview. Apparent, the competition was fierce. The advantage was which he had a good command of English. He owed to his first English teacher that he had a good pronunciation. Fortunately, all his efforts were not in the vain and he succeeded in finding his ideal job.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I went to People’s park as usually. I take part in a English activity called “English Corner” in the park every Sunday. When I was practising English there with some friends, two America students came. We were all interesting in sports, but we talked about our love of sports. I told them I liked playing football. They said they also liked them and they were even members of their school’s football team. We talk about some rules, some famous player and other things about football. I like this kind conversation, because I can not only pracise my English, but also to learn some other useful things.
I can’t live without music. It may not sound practically because things such as food, water and air is much more important than music for human beings. However, I think the thought of change the world by spreading the joy of music is not that ridiculous. Cimorelli is one of my favorite band. I’ve downloaded the great many of their songs. Whenever I feel down or disappointing, I listen to them because the lyrics (歌词) are positive and meaningful. Thanks to their songs, I have realized the important of helping others and that being different is not something to be ashamed. I also liked singing. Although I’m not really good at it, but I still enjoy it. I love music and I believe that great music can change people’s lives.
改错格式(要求):
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
My school schedule is tight than ever because I’m in the final year of high school. Therefore, I still manage to do what I can help with the housework. I’ve gotten into the habit of cleaning up after dinner when I turned nine. I also do thing like sweeping and washing clothes. I even begin to cook for my family last month. Doing the housework makes I learn to take responsibility at home, and in a long term, in society. For another, I find the time spend doing the housework with my parents really fun and rewarding. We chat with and sometimes even sing together!
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I went to the local store do some shopping. When I went to a store, two foreign visitors were happened to be there. The salesgirl didn’t know that they wanted to buy because they couldn’t speak Chinese. Saw this, I offered to help them. In my help, the two men got the things they wanted. They were very glad and thankful to her.
How happy I am that day. Though I knew little English, I could help others, it makes me further realize how important spoken English is. I’ll work even hard at it than before.