增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was very glad to have an excellent chance to visit and studied in Beijing last year. It is one of largest and most attractive city in the world. It offers visitors thousands of things to do, included visiting museums, beautiful parks but historical sites. I soon fell in love to Beijing because of their rich culture and history. I liked having a cup of black tea and walking along the river in the afternoon.
More important, people in Beijing were so friendly that they were always kindly helped me whenever I was in trouble. I will never forget my interested days in Beijing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In our daily life, it is our duty to make the disabled feel they are as important as other customers. I think I can give you some advices on how to serve disabled customers better.
Firstly, show your sincerely respect. It was necessary to use gestures when serving those with hearing problems. Secondly, you’d better to read the menu for blind customers, that can make them feel at home. Beside, don’t forget to prepare some tables specially designing for those in wheelchairs. Only when you meet their different needs they enjoy them in your restaurant. I hope all these will be of great useful.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Things have become differently since I cut my hair short. There were no special reason for me to do this. I just chose from a hairstyle I liked. One day, I go to the theater with my mom. A little boy besides me was looking at my face while I was waiting my popcorn. He might have thought I was a boy. I just turned around, smiled at him and said “hello” polite. He was surprised and apologized at once. He might have realized that I am actually the cute girl. I know people look at me out of curious. Beauty has many forms. I think the most beautiful thing is being confident and appreciating you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ˄) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一-横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限-词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am always told to working hard to have a good life in the future. Therefore ,I do my best to play basketball or study. I want to be basketball player when I grow up. To realize my dream, I practice with playing basketball regular , aiming to make my best shots. Although I'm interesting in watching TV , we manage to finish my homework first. I try my best in all the tests , especially in the math test because I found math more difficult than any other subjects. Anyway I will spare no effort and never give in on my study. I believe if I am sure 10 succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of poster in my community on which read “Green Community, Beautiful Home” I found the activity quite meaningfully and decided to take part.
Since my mom was fond of flowers, we choose Chinese roses. With everything preparing, I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered it.
Now looking after plant has become part of my life. This way, I can feel the simple pleasure of life but harvest a sense of achievement. The seedlings are grown little by little, and I can’t help picturing what beautiful our neighborhood will be when all the flowers come out.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
China is a country that playing table tennis is quite popular. Wang Wei is fond about this sport. Malong is one of the great players in the world so that she admires him a lot. Those inspiring story of his success have encouraged children to practice table tennis at early age. Competitions are being organized for schools to compete against each other every year. Last year, Wang Wei was lucky admitted as a school team member. She worked hard and won the first place with her amazed performance. When she received the gold medal, a sense of pride arise in her heart. Since then, she has been dreaming of win more medals in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Boys and girls,
To help improve students’ reading and writing skills, we will organize English composition contest, which theme is “Colorful Campus Life”. Remember your essay was expected to be within eight-hundreds words. If you are interested, please emailing your essay to Campuslife@126.com. A group of teachers will act for judges and pick out some excellence articles. Those whose works are selected will participate in the writing contest to be held in our province, represent our school. It’s you show time. Don’t miss such a good chance. For further information, just contact with Tel 8356219, and your participation will be appreciated.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As everyone knows, parents are concerned about their kids, so do my parents. They often get nervous when I’m about take an important test, which in turns adds to my anxiety. Now I have decided to discuss over the problem with them. I’ll tell them I have set a goal for myself and I will try to achieve them. When my parents are convincing I’ll be responsible for that I should do, they surely won’t feel worried any more. If you face the same problem, why not talking to your parents face on face? It will be a easy way to get on well with your parents.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Five years ago, my father, who was in his forty, lost his job. At first, he was in low spirits and often gets drunk. One day, he read a story about Ren Zhengfei and it was greatly inspired him. He turned to a friend, with which help he set up a factory. In his factory waste materials were made full use to produce environmentally-friendly packing bags. With these bags well receiving, his factory went smooth. Now, he has extra money but he often helps those in need. So far, he has donated as many as $10,000. How a great father I have!
