增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two months ago my mother and I were walking home from shopping while we noticed a small dog lying sill on the middle of the road. How danger it was! We got closely to him and found that he was badly injured. Saw the poor dog, we decided to help him. Immediately we called a taxi and send him to an animal hospital, where he was examined and received treatment. After staying in hospital for few days, he became good enough to walk. Then we took him home and looked after him carefully until he was fully recovered. Now he is already an important member of our family and brings ourselves a lot of happiness.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike for a birthday present.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body build up. Meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which was helpful in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally friendly means of transport. It is convenient to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere is the most important. Don’t hesitate, and trying to take action. I really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm delight to welcome you to our Wildlife Club.You’11 be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here.Here are the most visited tourist sites.
One of the pleasant place is Holland Common.This has been public land for two hundred of years，and that you’11 find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common.There’s information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day.Then there’s Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees.It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it's quite small，but if there were people around every day，many of the wildlife would keep away.
Have a good time here!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
School life is a large part of my adolescence．I have learned how to get on well with my fellow schoolmate and teachers at schoo1．It’s quite usual what arguments happen between students．For an example，we may have different opinions when it come to organizing an activity．
However，we have to learn to respect other people’s opinions and think about it carefully．It is necessary for us to have a discussion after we make a final decision．School life had really taught me how to communicate each other．It will certain play an important role in help me find a good job in the future．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandparents live in the countryside. They keep a dog calling Ah Bao. One day my grandparents go to work in the fields, taking along my little brother and Ah Bao. My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river. Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water. Hearing about him barking, my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother, that moved all the people present. Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr Li is my head teacher. He is now in his thirty and has been teaching in almost ten years. He has much knowledges and his teaching method is scientific. That he teaches us in class leaves a deep impression on us . All of us have learned a lot. Not only he strict but also he is kind and patiently. We often make mistakes, and he seldom blames us and just gave his encouragement to us. With his help , we have made a great progress. As a result, he is popular with our students. We all love him.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
The other day, our school invite a famous artist to teach us what to draw bamboo in traditional Chinese style.
When the artist entered into the classroom, he received warm welcome. Firstly, he showed them a great many skillful ways to draw bamboo. We surrounded him and watched him careful. Then we tried to do it by ourselves under his instruction. Finally, after failing several times I succeeded drawing a picture of bamboo, that made me so happy.
In this lesson, we were deeply impressing by the beauty of Chinese paintings and proud of be Chinese. We hope we can have more activity of this kind in the future!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
Time flies! What is everything going? I’m writing to tell you that a lecture about Tea Making, which is part of Chinese tradition culture, is to be hold in our school. The lecture will begin at 8: 30 am and end at 11: 30am next Tuesday in the lecture hall in our school. It will given by Professor Li, who is an expert for Tea Making, and you can ask me any question about Tea Making after the lecture. To make the best use of this chance, you need to get good prepared. First, you'd better get some informations about Tea Making ahead of time. Second, please take a notebook and put down what interest you most. I hope you will enjoy in the lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a muscle disease, so I can’t run or climb stairs as quick as other people. One problem is I don’t look any different with other people. So some children in my primary school laughed when I got out of the breath after running a short way. Now my life is a lot easier at high school because my fellow students had accepted me. I am very busy with no time to feel sorry for me. My dream is to work for a firm that develop computer software. Have a disability does not mean your life is not satisfied. So don’t feel sorry for the disabled and make fun of them.
