增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, our school held the sports activity in order to developed our awareness of fitness. That morning, all the students and teachers had gathered on the playground. Then the headmaster announced the begin of the opening ceremony. After the opening ceremony, all kinds of events started one after others. The playground was alive with excitement. That drew the most attentions was a competition between students and teachers. Since then, the teacher-student relationship has been strengthened, but so has the awareness of sportsmanship. I’m convincing that the unforgettable activity will get us prepared a better future both mentally and physically.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
High school is regarded as best time of my life. Beside classes and homework, there’s something more that I especial treasure. To leave school without regret, I’ll make the best of my limiting time to go over the lessons I’ve learned from. At the same time, I’d like to show my thanks to all the teacher who have given me so many help. For the purpose of improving me, I’ll ask my classmates for some advice, that may be of great value to me. Last but not least, doing some good deeds for my classmates was also my plan. With these things done, I will have no regret in my high school life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限1词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn’t want share things with other people. For an example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn’t care if something he did made people angrily. For instance, on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework, Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.