增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in Grade Eight, I was the member of the school choir. Confident of my sweet voices, I was delighted to sign up a singing competition. The audience gave a long and loudly applause when I finished my last high note. I hope to win first prize. However, the result was that I came second. Shocking and sad, I couldn’t help but to weep in a small voice. Just then, my friend Alice passed I a handkerchief and told me not to cry for what I lost and appreciate what I have. A warm smile and words of comfort relieved me of my grief, and I was not longer in low spirits.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限于一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you heard from Singles’ Day in China? Many people stay up lately that night, shop online to get big savings. Well, the US has something like it calling Black Friday.
Black Friday is one of the bigger shopping days in the US. It always falls on the day after the Thanksgiving holiday. On this day, store will offer special deals, just like on Singles’ Day in China. On Black Friday, shoppers will often wake up very early to wait in line at stores after they open. They might start wait in line as early as 2 or 3 am. Sometimes, the crowds will be such big that it is impossible to get inside the store. People sometimes fight over things because there are only a few are left.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, my dad and I took a bus to a village. Uncle Paul, my dad friend, picked us up or drove us to his farm. We spent the night in a guest room, listen to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early on the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfasts. After that, I went to help Aunt Mary feed chickens. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul I could take a horse ride, and he said yes as my father would go with him. My father and I headed slowly towards the mountains at the first. Eventually, my father was impressing to see me ride a horse free.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, I went to Australia for a short-term study like an international student. One of my classmates suggested we shared our favorite foods from our own countries during New Year’s party. We all agreed to this wonderful idea and cooked my unique dishes for the party. Hariyati from Indonesia shared a kind of cookie what was shaped like elephant ears. Susan from South Africa prepared some sweet dumplings packed in several banana leaf. Chiemi from Japan cooked special rice balls mixing with fish. And I was served sliced noodles, my hometown — Shanxi’s local food. These variously foods were all delicious. Therefore, my favorite was still Chinese food.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, when Chen Hui was pouring hot water, he poured a lot into his wrist by accident. Although he felt great pain, but he didn’t know what to do. I happened to see this and immediate gave him first aid. Firstly, I asked him place the burns under running water for 10 minutes. After that, I put some cloth in cold water, squeezed the water out and placed them on the burning area over and over again. Finally, I covered the burns with the clean bandage. Gradually, he felt much better, that made me happy and proud of myself. Chen Hui expresses his thanks and said he would gain some knowledge of first aid so that I could offer help to others when needed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem. First, make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors. Also, I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was very small, my parents will tell me stories before bedtime. Among these stories, I was very interesting in fairy tales. The famous stories like The Little Mermaid, Cinderella and Snow White are very familiar with me. I learned a lot of from these stories, what made me a strong girl. As a girl, I knew I must have a strong will like these fairy. I should ever run away or give up when faced with difficulties. The most important thing I learnt from the fairies was to have kind heart. As the saying went, a kind heart is a fountain of gladness, making something around it freshen into smiles.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Many parents have bought their children their own computers, hope that they will use them sensible for their schoolwork and have the latest skills. Schools teach information technology as an essential part of the school curriculum (大纲). But some people feel they have a lot of disadvantage. Teenagers don’t have a balanced life and computers are turning them into “geeks” which no longer take exercise or even know how to have a conversation. An expert also warns about the dangers of “chatting” to people one didn’t know over the Internet. “I strongly recommend that the government ban all Internet cafes as such many teenagers are wasting their time on games and Internet chatting which have nothing to do their schoolwork. But, some teenagers can be seen as good examples as they put the enthusiasm for computers to good use. Computers help him organize the schoolwork and learn a future career as well as.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the Chinese New Year, elders will give the younger generation red packet to show their blessings. Those worked will also give their parents and grandparents hongbao to wish him good health and long life. They were given during weddings and birthdays as well, neither in place of or in addition to presents. In the workplace, employees may sometimes receive red packets as form of appreciation for their hard work, that are unrelated to the annual bonus. Different blessings are written on red packets for differently occasions, so keep this in mind when you are being shopping for one. Besides, there are no hard and fast rules about how many should be in a hongbao.
