增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
During last year’s Spring Festival, I organized a badminton match for my large family. I came up this idea because we tended to overeating and failed to do enough exercise during this period these years. “My proposal won support from my uncles, aunts, several cousins or especially my grandparents.” When asking by my father why I chose this sport, I said almost everyone could play the badminton. The match, what lasted for the whole afternoon, ends without a winner. But after the match, we were quite “energy and relaxed.” Festivals are occasions for happy, but they can never be achieved without health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I take part in the Cultural Exchange Week in London last month. Honest speaking, I enjoyed myself in a city. I paid a visit a city museum and some places of interest. They made me have a better understanding of the British society, culture or history. Of course, I also made several new friend there, who hobbies are similar to mine. What’s more, I was lucky to call on a pen friend, Johnson, who had been in touch with myself for a long time. I will never forget the most happiest days that we spent together. When returning to China safely, I felt very satisfying.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多若(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place in which I like. In this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the aim of recycling used books and presenting them to children in the need, the students’ union will launch a campaign titled “Secondhand Books Donation” next month. To start with, donation boxes, that are about to be collected by the volunteers twice a week, would be placed in classrooms. In addition, what is also acceptable to take donations directly to your office on weekdays. Then, the collected book will be delivered to the primary students in remote but rural areas. This activity is great significance. Not only will the children get books to read, but also we will gain happiness by help others. So let’s participate active in it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you had advertised for. Personally, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledges and experience, but it can make the visitors all over the world to know better about our culture.
On one hand, have a good command of English, I can communicate with foreign people freely. On the other hand, in the past three years I have taken part in many activities, in that I performed well and gained rich experience. More importantly, my skills in teamwork and sports contribute for my application for the job. I believe I can do a good job for the games. My promise is to offer the best serve possible to the people at the games. Hope the games will be great success.
I would be very gratefully if you could give him a chance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I walked my dog, Zuma, in a small square near my home, when there was a little blond-haired boy. She looked kind of lonely and was kicking a football by himself. For my surprise, Zuma, who had been afraid of other child before, was drawn to the little boy. So, I would asked permission for us to watch his football practice. He was shyly but said OK. Later, Zuma got so exciting watching him kick the football that he ran up to the boy. We are extremely happy to cheer on little boy. And I felt he had a good time with us, either.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第 11处起) 不计分。
I’ve been passionate about being a competitively swimmer ever since that I was a small child. My dad used to take me to the local swimming pool every Saturday’s for swimming lessons. While the other kids was moving around noisily in the water, I used every second of that time to practice my strokes (泳姿). Soon, I started entering race, and even though I didn’t win them all, I kept improve my time. By time I was 14, I was the faster swimmer at my school. Now my burning ambition is to swim to my country. With practice and determination. I believe I can made great progress as a swimmer beyond my wildest dreams.
Dear Tom,
I’m terrible sorry for being unable to reply your last letter. The final exam, which all of us attached great important to, took up all my spare time. Hoping you can forgive me for the delay.
You asked about my plans for the summer vacation. To start with, you intend to take a part-time job as an assistant teacher in a school, where I believe will be beneficial in return. Beside, I consider it excited to tour China, enjoy beautiful scenery and taste local food. Last but not least, being a volunteer has always been my a dream. I’ll devote me to helping people in need.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is often the case, a good sleep can fill us with energy for the coming day, allowing us to do our study in a effective way. Meanwhile, stay up too late is bad for our healthy. If we sleep too late, we’ll feel tired the next day but can’t concentrate better.
To have a good sleep habit, we should keep a good sleep pattern and follow them strictly. Beside, it’s highly recommended we go to sleep before 10 pm. If we have trouble fall asleep for a long time, we should consult about a doctor.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的次用斜线\划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，超出部分（从第11处起）不计分。
As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another chance of trying out arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player in our school team.
From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.
