增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43. 3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82. 8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Ms Li,
I am very glad to have you as an our English teacher.
As the world is become a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English mean we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two mainly problems in my study are that I feel difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when spoken English. I really hoped that you can give me good advices on how to memorize new words. Other suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speak. I believe you can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember the lesson my mom teaches me. It was an very important exam. I met such a puzzling question that I couldn’t answer with it easily. So I put my hand into the pockets to take out the mobile phone find the answer. Suddenly the teacher stood beside me. I was catching cheating. Then my mom was asked to come to the school. Having heard that I did, my mom was so angrily but said nothing. That night I thought my mom would shout at me, but he just told me not to cheat in the future. After that, I ever cheated in any exam.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Women’s Day. I decided to give my mother a surprise. Immediately after the school, I started to prepare dinner. It is the first time that I had cooked something on her own. Not knowing the exact procedures to cook, I read some recipe first. Keeping that I had learned in mind, I set about cook. Almost an hour later, three simple but deliciously dishes were ready on the table. No soon had everything been ready than she came back. A big smile with both surprise and satisfaction spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty dinner but the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose the bottom of my heart.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We meet at the school gate at 9 o’clock as scheduled. Upon arrival, we were divided into seven groups, each take charge of an area. Besides, we put up a slogan to call on visitors protect the environment
With summer approaching, more and more people along with their kids spend their time in the forest park which some people leave behind them a trail of rubbishes. Unfortunately, our activity successfully drew much attention from a public in the park. Some gave us the thumbs up, and some joined in us voluntarily. How a successful and meaning activity he was.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处.多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs Jones,
How is everything going?
Knowing your sixty birthday is coming, I’d like to say ”Happy birthday" to you! I go to London and lived in your family one year ago. As a exchange student, I couldn’t adapt(适应) ourselves to the new living environment and lifestyle there at first. It was you which told me not to be nervous and helped me get used them. Stay with you has become the most unforgettably experience for me now. Would you like to come to China to have visit me? If so, I’ll show you around my city but take you to taste local delicious food. I m sure you will like it.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, everyone! I’m glad to stand here to talk about how we can do for our school. We all know that a small act is going to makes a big difference. First of all, we can easily make our school more beautifully. For example, every one of them can take care of a tree or to organize a thorough cleaning in the school. We can pick up rubbishes on the floor or put it into the trash cans. In the end, never forgot to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. Don’t leave the water run or waste any food while we are eating in the dining rooms. If we can do so, I believe we’ll turn our school into much better place!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With time going by, more and more unforgettable things have appeared in my life. That has impressed me most is the experience of chatting with the elderly. Last summer holiday, I volunteered work as a cleaner in a nursing home. Not only did I sweep the floor and washed dishes but I took care of the elderly as well. The cleaning job in the nursing home was hard and bored and seemed endless, where made me so tired that I wanted to give up halfway. However, chatting with the old people with rich experience broadened their mind and made me fill with energy. Seen the smiling faces, I gradual had a better understanding of the voluntary work. Therefore, I stuck to my job with determination and had a fun. Never will I forget those days.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After class, our math teacher and all the classmate left the classroom except Jenny and me. They were both busy doing homework. Twenty minutes later, when I was about to leave, and I found Jenny was crying sadly. She didn't know what to solve at math problem. I'm good at math, so I decide to help her. After a while, Jenny managed to working out the problem under my help. She was such happy that she thanked me for giving her helping hand It is amazed to see my little help stop her from feeling bad.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When it comes to go on a travel, I can’t help thinking of an unforgettable visit to Jiuzhaigou in Sichuan Province in 2017. I went there with my parents, that strongly recommended me to go with him. It was a long distant from my home to Jiuzhaigou. As a result, I expressed my regret about choosing the journey. However, when we reached the destinations, I was shocked to see the amazing scenery in the front of me. I had never seen so beautiful clear water before I travelled there. The surroundings there attract us so much that I as well my parents didn’t want to return home. All in all, it was an unforgettable experience. In the future, I will possible go there again on holiday.