增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? I’d like to invite you a music festival to be held the next Sunday morning in our school hall.
The music festival would last four hours in total. It will have many excellent performances, including some traditional music pieces playing with Chinese instruments, like pipa, guzheng or erhu. In addition, some traditional Chinese dances will be performed by student. What’s more important is that some famous Chinese musicians will show off to perform. Since Chinese music is something which makes you crazy, I’m sure you will have fun if you can come.
Looking forward to our coming and hoping we can see your wonderfully performances.
Yours,
Li Hua
My exchange year was a great experience for me. I successfully enhanced their language skills. To be precise, my speech experience helped me develop my English speaking skills, thus allow me to understand more about how to make presentations in the public. Besides, I meet all kinds of helpful people there and had fun. I thanked those people which helped me. I learned to think about things from a different point view. Meanwhile, I learned to give back to societies and serve others without expect anything in return. In shortly, I did gain something value from the trip abroad.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I visited Mountain Dragon with several classmate today. We arrived at the foot of Mountain Dragon on half past nine and spend nearly one hour in climbing. We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very freshly. We did not feel tiring at all. When we got to the top, and we were all wet with sweat. We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating anything. There were several temples in the mountain. Monks (僧侣) in a temple was singing. We watched for a longer time because we had never seen this before. It was really a beautiful mountain.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When it come to the ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, fall on June 8th, is aimed at raising aware of preserving the ocean.
The ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offered us sufficient food, and it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is crucial for us preserve the ocean. First of all, place importance in our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into the ocean.
What’s the more, we can also hand out booklets to call on more people to preserve the ocean. The more people are involved, the good the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to preserving the ocean. To preserve the ocean is to protect ourself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While walk out of the supermarket yesterday, I saw a lady pulling a cart with three big bag of groceries. I watched her go towards her car from the supermarket. I waited to see that a clerk would come out to help her, but no one came. So I said to her, “Madam, did you need help?” She was surprised and excitedly replied, “Oh yes! It couldn’t be best! Thank you! ”
My car happened to parked right beside his. As I helped her put her groceries into her car, she thanked to me again and wished me a good day. I felt happily knowing that I could lend the hand to someone in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How are you doing these days? Hear that you are going back to Britain next week, and I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your teaching and the assistance given to me during the previous year.
So far you had taught us English for about one year. I still remember the time when we made tastily turkey and had a party last Thanksgiving Day. It was during that time that you chatted with us and shared so much interesting things about your country with us. Thus I learned a lot about your country’s food, culture and history and the beautiful small town when you were born. Which is the most important is that we’ve become good friends since then. Though I feel a little sorry that you are leaving soon, I am pleasing to know you can be reunited your family soon. I really hope we can keep in touches often.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Yue has awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” due to that she did for our class.
In the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue walked from one store to another, with the purpose of looking for the costume we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time, but she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. We were such moved by her efforts that we tried our best and won the first prize in a contest.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cared a lot about the class. However, she deserves the honour and we should learn from him.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Reading plays a important part in our life. Just as the old saying goes, books are the stepping stone to human progress. For me, books are like wisely teachers and good friends. They inspire me go forward, and help me understand the world. I was fond of reading. I read various books, of whom literary books are my favorite, especially those by famous writers. They can help improve my written skills and broaden my horizons. Beside, they can enrich my life and provide me for great fun. I believe the more books we read, the more better our life will be.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am sorry to hear that you are frequently suffered from illnesses because your weak im-mune system. I am writing to offer you some advices. Firstly, keep a balanced diet, which benefited your body a lot. Secondly, which is known to all, the best way to prevent diseases are to take exercise. Therefore, remember to keep doing exercise regular. Thirdly, the happier you are, the healthiest you will be. In other words, keeping your spirits up is another effective way to improve our immune system. If you follow my suggestions, and I am sure you will be healthy and happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.
