增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Last Sunday, our class took a trip to the West Mountain Park. At 8:00 a. m., we gathered on the playground and march in a line towards the park. We were all in highly spirits. We sang and chatted as we climbed along the winding walkway, enjoyed green trees and blossoming flower. It was not until we reached the lawn square at top of the mountain where we had a rest and took photos. An hour later, we picked up after us and returned. Both my legs was heavy on the way back. However, I was proud of that I could have the perseverance or courage to complete the trip.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m a Chinese student taking summer courses in London now. Hearing that volunteers are need for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery, I can’t waiting to apply for the position. The following is my advantages.
Firstly, I can express myself free in fluent English so there isn’t any trouble in communicating with visitor. Besides, I have participated in several similar activities, that enriched my relevant experience. Last but not least, as Chinese painting lover, I know a lot of about this art form, enabling me to help visitors have a better understanding of the paintings. If accepted, I’ll try your best to introduce those wonderful works seriously and answer questions patiently. I believe I can do the work well.
Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to hear from you.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our English teacher, Mr. Wang, is strong man in his thirties, which is often simply dressed. He has been teaching us English since he graduates from the English Department of Beijing Normal University. He devotes all his time and energy to teach, often working later to prepare his lessons. He is capable of making his lessons lively and interested, and all of us like his lessons. He is very strict with us, but he gives us great concerns. He offers us help whenever we need them. We all considers him as our good teacher and close friend. We all respect for and love him.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to make best of learning materials, the Students’ Union of our school is planning an activity. The schoolleavers are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the student in the lower grades. The idea, that is intended to promote friendship and encourage a lowcarbon lifestyle, are highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike. The activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and so it will last eleven days, from June 10 to 20. As a student, I am strong for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope that this kind of activity would continue every year for the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)・并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意: I.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last weekend, our school was held an interesting activity, aiming to relieve us senior three students from pressure.
On Monday morning, my class teacher told us we should prepare for an activity "Tong Zhou Gong Ji", that means 'be in the same boat'. On hearing the news, I, together for my best friend, registered for it excited. The activity required effective cooperation with teammate. Therefore, we practiced (he game after school during the following days. Under the guidance of their classmates, we mastered the skills and got prepared. Then comes the big day. We managed to running fast at the same pace arm in arm. The playground was filled with laughter and cheers. A few minutes late, we crossed the finishing line.
We did really good job and felt very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Nathan,
I'm Li Hua, president of English Club in Hongshui High School. Know that you are leaving for Britain, I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for that you did as our foreign teacher.
Honestly speaking, some activities hold by our club would not have being so successful without your help. When we were preparing for the English Drama Competition, you offered plenty of advices about students’ English pronunciations as well as how to perform in a impressive way, which greatly improved their confidence on the stage. However, inspired by you, we organized several English Movie Nights when students could watch English movies with you and discuss in English afterwards. Not only they practice their spoken English, but also they had a better understanding of foreign cultures.
Now, face with your leaving, I hope you will have a great life back in your hometown. We will miss you a lot of. Take care!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在英下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat. Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us think. Last Sunday my parent were away on business. I left alone, with no one to cook for me, as I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal. Early in the morning I went to the market, buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back. Before cooking, I put a few oil, salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it together. When the pot was hotter enough, I began to fry the steak. Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it. The food tasted deliciously!
Last year, Jack and his classmates made a trip to London. On his arrival at the airport, it was raining heavy. So they took a bus to the hotel, where was not far from the airport. The next day, they can’t wait to see the wonderful place of interest in London. They first went to the Elizabeth Tower, symbol of the United Kingdom. The guide told them the tower had been appeared in many films. Then they visited the British Museum. To their great surprise, they found much Chinese artworks displayed there. Felt very proud, they took a lot of photos but they really had great fun.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My hobby is rock climbing. I’ve been doing them for two years. In the beginning, I wasn’t very good, so I’ve gotten much better. I started rock climbing in junior high school. On first day, I felt high nervous, so I only climbed low rocks. It was hard, but very interested. So I kept on work, and now I could climb very fast. I like rock climbing because of it helps me stay in shape. It’s also a good way to make friend. I’ve met a lot of people. We climb, but we also hang out and spend time doing another things now.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to learn that you are interesting in the students’ reading in your school. We have a grand library on a collection of 200,000 books and 5 large reading rooms, in that we have easy access to the network. Anyone fond of reading is freely to go there whenever they are available. A monthly activity is holding for students exchange their ideas about reading. Every autumn we had a reading festival where drama performances are shown and distinguished writer are invited.
In the library, books on history are my favorites, from which I get a better understanding of human civilization and a progress both in China and abroad.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
