增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today we experienced enjoyable period of English class as usually. As soon as the bell rang, our teacher began to divide us from several groups to do the writing. After we knew when to do next, we set out to held a discussion immediately. Some students shared their ideas about the main point s while others added the detailed informations. Then we finished it quickly. Comparing to the compositions of the other groups, our is better. Whenever I passed by the Learning Garden on the back wall of our classroom in this week, our composition catch my eyes, reminding me of the excellent team work of our group.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know that a Chinese painting exhibition hold by the local government is about to kick off in the art gallery. Now I want to apply to the voluntary job. Firstly, I’m proficient in English, but I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Secondly, I am so responsible and outgoing that I can get along well with other. What’s more, I am a lot of more experienced because I work as a volunteer in our local museum 3 months ago. Most importantly, I have good knowledge of Chinese art, which enables me to introduce Chinese paintings to visitor clearly and expertly. I think I am suit for this job. I would appreciate it whether you could give me a chance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I was left alone at home, struggle with my history homework. To seek inspiration, I decided to hang out. I was wandering around the town center while I discovered a museum. Walking in, I saw some ancient fishing equipments on display. Then I went one floor up. That drew my attention were some old tape machines I have never seen before. Fascinated by its mystery, I listened to a lively introduction of their history. On the three floor, there was a unique prehistoric painting. But regretful, I wasn’t allowed take pictures. Anyway, the museum not only offered me with a source of inspiration but a place to relax.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My book is The Call of the Wild. I bought one in Xinhua book store, which cost me 30 yuan. The book, which cover is black and green, contains 300 pages. Having been read the story three times, I am always touched by the dog experiences. From the dog Bark’s grow, I realize each living being is born to adapt to nature and competition. Since I want to read another work writing by Jack London, I would like to exchange this book another novel called White Fang. If anybody is willingly to exchange the one with me, please contacting me immediately. It’s an pleasure to share books. Looking forward to your reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, my classmates and I did an tree planting activity for our coming-of-age ceremony. In the morning, we meet at the school gate and took the school bus to the tree planting place. Upon arrival, we set to work immediate. Some dug hole, and some carried and planted young trees, while others watered it. We all worked too hard that we finished the task ahead time. After getting the work done, we put up a board read “Adult Forest”. Then we took some photos to recording our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, so we all had a sense of achievement.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For thousands of years, people had accepted challenges in different fields. There are not only physical challenges and also intellectual challenges. Some people risk his lives to play sports to see how good they can do. Others try to invent something make life easier. They all enjoy challenges. Today, there are still much challenges before us. Medical science face the challenge of conquering(攻克)many diseases what still attack human beings. Engineers and planners must build new city and design new kinds of transportation. Scientists must develop new forms of energy. In short of, we live in an age full of challenges.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Life without a hobby is like food without salt. I have much hobbies like drawing, gardening and reading, among what my favorite is gardening.
I enjoy tending my plants but watering them every day, which gives me sense of achievement and satisfaction. Additionally, the beauty of flowers makes me relaxing. My hobby is really helpful for my study, especial when I’m tired after doing my schoolworks. It is a great relief for me to seeing beautiful flowers and lovely plants. Doing that can give you a good chance to breathe and think of freely.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Like million of other people, Mr. Griffin who is a head of IT for marketing agency Rise at Seven, kept a dog during the pandemic. With most of us working home during lock downs, many people wanted pets’ companionship.
When bosses require staff to return to the office at least a few days a week, have a pet dog can become a problem. You have to see if a friend or relative can look after it, and pay for expensive doggier day care, or even potentially try to get a new job that allow you to continue to work from home all the time. It was to help employees such as Mr. Griffin more easily return to the office after the pandemic which Rise’s bosses decided to let everyone bring their dogs to the office.
Mia King, one of the firm’s executive says that rather than being a distraction, having dogs at work has actually made staff work hard. Because they make everyone happy, and cheery staff are more product.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
With the homeworks finished last Saturday, I went to countryside to visit my uncle. At about 8, I set out and arrived at my uncle’s after an hour. Seeing me, he felt very exciting and welcomed me warmly. I handed him the fresh fruit and flowers bought in the supermarket but he gave me some snacks. Then we went to catch fish. It was not long since we caught a lot of fish. Have brought them home, my uncle cooked some for me. After lunch, I helped him bathing the dog and he praised me with a big smile in his face. When it was time for me to leave, my uncle gave me some gifts that I liked very much, and hugging me. It was an amazing day which I will never forget it forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a fruit truck sell fruits in the parking lot of Walmart yesterday. My mom took a big box and it has 6 mini baskets of strawberries in it.
She knew we could not finish them all before they went badly. So today she asked my dad give some to our neighbors. He initially resisted and he did eventually go to three of our neighbors and gave each one a basket. On returning back to home, he told me which he said to them, which surprised me! “Hi, my family and I are going around spreading loves to the neighborhood by giving out baskets of strawberries. Would you like any?”
We gratefully accepted. That was an sweet interaction.
