增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, my mother and I went to a park. We had a goodtime, deciding to have the lunch in the park. With some milks and bread ready, my mother and I went to wash my hands. However, when we came back, our bread was going! We thought that it was someone took it. We were very angry. I thought that the thief will come back to take the milk. So, my mother and I hid behind a tree or waited. One hour late, no one came. We were such hungry that we had to give in. Suddenly, I found something under the chair. Oh, it was our bread!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father often took me to his hospital when I was off school. He showed me what his medical instruments were used. I felt so close to him. However, before I went to high school, somehow I became distantly from him. I was unwilling to talk about him and often disobeyed his rule of staying out with my friends too late. The disagreement was such sharp that neither he nor I knew how to settle them. One day, he talked with me and hoped to mend our relation. With the efforts were made by both sides, we began to understand each other a bit good.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The unforgettable birthday party for him is not one of my birthday but it is my grandfather’s. My uncle held so a big party that all the relatives and friends of his family could get together and enjoyed that wonderful time. The party began at noon and many neighbors had gone to my uncle’s house do their help in the morning. In the afternoon, more people came up many presents for visiting grandpa. My grandpa said that if it was his 60th birthday and this day was the better of his life. You can imagine how touching my grandfather was on that day. Grandpa loved the big lively party.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, to support the activity of environmental protection, Jack and I was passing from Mainpuri city to another city while two young kids came to us and said: “Well done, you are doing good work. We are with you.” It was a very inspirational moment for me to get acknowledged and appreciate. They walked with us for one mile. They were very impressed by our work and looked very happily. They also offered food. But their words and companies were enough for us. Before that we didn’t need food or water, so we thanked them and were moved forward. Through journey, I hoped everyone could realize the important of environmental protection.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is reported that 1 out of 3 school child doesn’t have the needed supplies support their learning. To collect school supplies for the needy students, my friends and me organized a charity action in our school on last Sunday. I lay some tables in the playground, where the students involving in it could put their donations. Eventual, forty backpacks filled with school supplies was donated to the needy children. Meantime, we collected two boxes of school supplies for teachers with the total value of approximately $1,100. It’s amazing that we can accomplish when we work together!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Football is my favorite sport. I usual play football with my friends after school and join competitions. I have benefited a lot from play football. It helps me keep health and provides me with a way to relax me during stressful school days. Beside, I’ve become braver when facing challenges. It also teaches me good teamwork is the key to success and it has been brought me many friends with a same interest. Therefore, I suggest teenager do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose something what suits us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was a member of a tennis team in our school. One day, I saw a girl was not very friend to her partner, who I could tell were feeling upset and discouraged. See this, I went to the store without the hesitation, purchasing her a cute tennis cap and a chocolate bar. I wrote her in a note, telling her what an awesome teammate but tennis player she was. The next day while she saw me at the door, she said thanks to me. She was so moving that she talked to me for about 45 minute. Hopefully, she felt good after that.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On graduation approaching, I can’t help consider my college major. As a science student, I show great interests in physics, so chances are that I will take physics as my major.
As far as I am concerned, physics plays essential part in the development of our country. Moreover, by majoring in physics, I cannot only satisfy my person interest but also contributed to the scientific and technical progress of China. Meanwhile, physics will be help me have a deeper understanding of what the world works, fostering my creativity and critical thinking ability.
Above all, to get fully prepared for my cream major, I must learn a lot of basically knowledge. Furthermore, I’ll try various ways to broad my view in physics and concentrate all my efforts on China’s development.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month, there was news about two pandas that sent to Holland and would live there for ten years. People there held the big celebration, and feel so happy to see these two lovely creatures. Indeed, the whole world is crazy about the panda, as it has a lovely image and no one can resist their charm. If a country wants to rent a panda, the government needs to make efforts to creating the environment where suits the panda. It will be a lucky thing for them to have pandas. Pandas are usually looked on for the loveliest diplomatic officers. Everybody loves them so deep no matter that what happens. This love can help us overcome many problems between different culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a neighbor who are a hard-working nurse. One day, she asked me if I could help her to deal with a bookcase that she didn’t need anymore. I said sure and we loaded it in her car. As we were working on unloaded it at the garbage station, my next-door neighbor came over but asked if we needed help. He carried that big bookcase into the garbage station quick! I gave my nurse friend a book calling American Nightingale, a book about Frances Slanger—a WW II nurse. I know my nurse neighbor doesn’t have time cook much, so I gave some apple cookies where I just made to her. And some cookies would go to my next-door neighbor and her family. They were very pleasing. I love my neighbor.
