增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Technology is everywhere, affecting almost every aspect of our life. So it is no doubt that technology had become an important part of our daily life. But it is actually a double-edged sword.
Taking the Internet for example. For one thing, the Internet makes our study more convenient, what definitely improves our learning efficiency. For another, it provides us with an excellent opportunity to broaden our horizon. However, it can sometimes do harm to our health, especially our eyes, unless we overuse it.
As a result, when it comes to technology, we should look it objectively and reasonable. We should make the full use of the Internet and meanwhile, protect yourselves from its potential harm.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My cousin Tom was getting married the day after tomorrow. In order leave early tomorrow to help him with the wedding ceremony, I worked overtime today to finish edit the report in advance. When everything was settled, it was almost 11 p. m. The street was dark and there was no vehicle in my sight, let alone a taxi. To make matter worse, my phone was dead but I couldn’t get a ride on Uber. I was shaking with cold in this freezing December night, feeling helpless, while a delivery man approached me. Having known what had happened, he voluntary gave me a lift home, on his motorbike. How an unforgettable experience!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, reading the Sunday newspaper and expected a couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to invite us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they could have gone to the house on the another side of the street.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
It was raining hard outside, which made it difficultly for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in she fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for their child. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much bringing me up. How shall I do for you?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my friends and I decided to go to skiing together. As we arrived, we could see the slopes cover in a blanket of white, which waited for us to overcoming them. We eager rented our skis and snowboards and made our way to the beginner’s slope. Some of us were experiencing skiers, when others were trying it for the first time. We encouraged each other but shared tips on how to manage the slopes. As we slid down hill, a sense of joy filled the air. We challenged us to tackle more challenging runs. Skiing together not only allowed us to enjoy the thrill of the sport but strengthen our friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Looking back on my senior school life, I have so many things to share them with you. I still remember I step into my high school with high expectations. Therefore, I felt so frustrated after the first month test. I even began to doubt that I was qualified to be a senior school student. With the helps of friendly classmates and teachers, I picked up my courage and regained the spirits to devote myself to my study, thus do well in some academic performances. Besides, I took active part in colorful after-school activities, on which I benefited a lot. In a word, I am now satisfied with my senior school life which are part of my growth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, I’d like to share you something about my sister whom inspires me a lot. She has always been my role models due to her determination.
My sister, currently in college pursuing her dream of becoming a doctor, have faced numerous obstacles along the way. Therefore, never did she let these setbacks discourage her. Instead, she turned it into stepping stones for success. Her determination to achieve her goals has taught me the greatly importance of never giving up.
Additionally, my sister’s ability to find solutions to any problem inspires me deeply. And her approach to overcome challenges with a smile reminds me of that a positive mindset can overcome any difficulty.
In conclusion, inspiring by her story, I will try to follow in her footsteps and achieve my own dreams with the same level of determination.
8 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When studied in elementary school, I talked to a better friend about volunteering. I was sorry to hear she has never volunteered before. More surprising, several days later I was told that opportunity to volunteer was not easy to get for other classmates either. Then I came up with an idea, this was to organize one volunteer opportunity a month at school. Other kids would make a difference through simple act of service if I could offer situations to teach them the importance of giving back. However, I presented my idea to our headmaster. To his great happiness, it was recognized. It started as one project in a small classroom, and eventually was turned out a success in my whole school.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
There are many unforgettable person around us. But for me a most unforgettable one is my English teacher, Mr. Liu. That frequently brings back my memories is his great qualities. First, he gave us the greatest gift a good teacher could offer — an awakening of a passion with learning. He led us to the beautiful of the English language. Furthermore, I attracted by his lively wisdom. We students were always eager to attended his class because his lectures were humorous delivered. Although it has been nearly five years since I attended his last class, but he is the talk of our classmates, and I know part of her has already stayed in my heart.
