增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Jimmy. I’m writing to recommend me as a candidate for the chairman of the English drama club. Equipping with fluent English and a good knowledge of drama, I have no difficulty communicating with others in English. I know exact what is expected of a leader of the club but I’m experienced in cooperating. In addition of, I’ve been working in student organizations for while, so I’m quite familiar to the daily routines. Last but not least, I’m enthusiastic about drama and eager to take responsibility for a reliable chairman, contributing to the prosper of English drama. Should I have the opportunity to serve the club, I will lead it to the best of my ability.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。句意：
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。句意：
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How are you doing these days? Yesterday, my class has had a discussion about how to lead a low-carbon life. I was impressing by some of the ideas and would like to share them to you.
In the meeting, we shared various tip for leading a low-carbon life. It turns out that adopting a greener lifestyle is not difficult at all. For example, we can get into the habit of turning on lights and taps when not use them. You can also use reusable cloth bags when we shop. In additional, we can make fashionable to use handkerchiefs instead of tissues.
How does your country promote low-carbon lifestyles and encourage people to protect an environment? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Late in the evening I was walking in the park. Suddenly I heard screams coming from behind the bushes. I stopped listening and understood that a girl attacked. I heard sounds of fighting. For several moments I was hesitating that I should get involved, but I was frightened and worried about my own safe.
Then I realized that the girl’s voice became more weaker, so I knew I had to act quickly. The next moment, I ran behind the bushes and pulled the attacker off the girl. We fell to the ground and fought with each other for several minute. Then the attacker jumped up and ran away.
Breathing hardly, I slowly came up to the girl. It was dark, but I could not see her face clearly. I felt that she was very frightened. I told her she is safe now. After a few seconds I heard her words with the great surprise in her voice. And then I realized that the girl was my youngest daughter.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled of great anxiety. However, I couldn’t be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approach me and said, “In life we all have moment when we can’t achieve what we want it. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you,but turn them into motivation (动力) to inspire you.” Her words was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life. Finally, I gained what I deserved.
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine what keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to making good friends so that we can always have a fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honesty and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trusts me. I always care about what had happened to them, because I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and play. I try to offer some advices to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to keep friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
To better file my papers, I bought the hole punch (打孔器). It's simply but useful. I don't think that necessary to punch a row of holes on one side, but I only punch holes at the corner of each piece of paper. Then I sort out every subject and different kind of papers. I find it's quite efficient when they review before exams. Not only can the hole punch improve on my learning efficiency but also makes me form the habit of tidying my room. I understand the importance for classifying things, so I set aside some time to clean my room every day. Filing papers is necessary to study, and I advise you have a try.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday, I invited Alan to my house to spend the Mid-Autumn Festival. While we were wait for a big lunch, both Alan and I felt hungry. After having the big lunch, we felt full of energetic. In the afternoon, my mother taught Alan and me to make mooncakes, which made us especially exciting. We listened my mother carefully and made the mooncakes with great patience. At the last, we made some beautiful mooncakes. In the evening, we ate the mooncakes made by themselves and enjoyed my father’s stories about the festival. Late, Alan told me that he would never forget the day where we celebrated the Mid-Autumn Festival together. He hoped that he could spent many other traditional Chinese festival in my house.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Of all the people I have encountered in my life, a person I admire most is my English teacher.Working for our class teacher, she has to work around the clock to take good care of us as well as giving lectures and grade homework.She always walks towards the bus stop, carrying a bag full of notebook or a big folder with assessment reports she makes the night before.She is the one whom we spend major part of our day and she is the one who constant encourages us to break barriers and to be extraordinary.We owe all of our success to him.I will not forget her instructions but I would like to express to my deepest gratitude to her.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Linda's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday, which made her very exciting. Then she began to ride it fast on the road. Seeing a man getting closely to her, Linda couldn't stop it and as a result, she knocked onto the man. Being very kind, so the man didn't scold her at all. Instead, he told her how dangerously it was to ride a bike so fast. He asked her to keep the lesson in mind. Linda felt regretful but ashamed. She promised keep the lesson in mind forever. Then, the man bend down and began to repair her bike. After a while, he got them repaired. Linda was greatly moved. She thanked the man and left happily.
