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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m so honored to serving as your guide to a local restaurant which you can taste traditional Chinese food. The restaurant well known to many people. It has high quality dish as well as top service. A traditional and special soup dumplings are its specialty, which I did believe you will like. In the way, it’s convenient to get to there by bus. We’ll meet at the bus stop near us school at 10 o’clock this Sunday morning. Bus No. 9 will direct take us there.
Wish you a good time.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
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修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandmother is born on a farm in California. At 18, she left home and worked as a house keeper in a painter’s house until she married with my grandfather at 27. A couple farmed for most of their lives, first in Virginia and then in New York. In my grandmother’s late seventy, she made a decision learn to paint. She said she just wanted to keep busily, though she had had that dream since she first saw his former employer paint. A few years later, her hard work finally paid for. Her pictures were first selling at a local market and were soon noticed by a businessman, that bought everything she painted.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In life, we should always care about the people around us, especially those which need help. Helping other not only makes them feel warm but also makes us more responsibly.
Last week I saw an elderly person to fall down on the street, and I quickly run over to help him up. I was busy at that time, and I still decided to help him. The elderly person was very grateful to my help and said he hadn’t met such a kind young man in a long time.
Through this experience, I realize that helping others is a important thing. Each of us should do our part to taking care of the people around us. Only in this way our society become better and more harmonious.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer of 2023, some students from my school and I served as performer at the opening ceremony of the 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou. Looked back, I realized that the experience was magical and value. From June 25, we devoted ourselves the training. We feel hungry, thirsty and exhausted before countless rehearsals (排练). Although they were not professional actors, we tried our best to deliver a group performance perfect. While we didn’t receive many screen time, our collective spirit and dedication were left a lasting impression on people.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The environment pollution becomes more and more seriously today. We may have little clean water to drink in the future because of water has been polluted. And when trees are cut down, some animal disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Much people have died of diseases caused by pollute. In order to live a better life, it’s time for us protect our world. We should recycle and reuses resources in our life, which saves money and reduces pollution. Don’t use plastic bags. And we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them down. In the near future, we will have an unique and clean world with your efforts.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I still remember my working experience in a restaurant last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a meal. However, that attracted my attention was not the menu, but a notice that said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements and thought maybe I could had a try. On arriving home, I talk to my parents about get a part-time job in the restaurant during the summer vacation. They strong supported me. Determined to challenge me, I went to the interview. Fortunately, I passed it but I was really pride of myself!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Xiao Li,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English al oud and try to learn something important by heart, which can help you remember it easily and form the good habit of think in English. I listen a lot of and talk with others in English. However, I have improved my spoken English. I keep an diary in English every day and my written English are becoming better and better. I also try my best master the necessary grammar. In this way, I can expressed myself in English correctly. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be very use to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When the news came which I was not chosen as a member of the volleyball team, I was so disappointed that I almost decided give up. However, my best friend Mary analyzed her problems. She pointed out that my lazy and poor preparation led to my failure. From then on, I devoted all my spare times to practising playing and consult my teachers about skills. When another chance came up, I have got fully prepared, as a result of which, I was chosen but became one of the most important players in our school team. From this story, I am definitely convinced that the well prepared we are, the more likely we are able to achieve of our goals.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many students in our school don’t have enough time do sports. Most of our time is spent on study, which causes some health problem. Thus, our school is held Sunshine Sports activities to improve our physical but mental health. The activities are conducted on every afternoon. We are free to do however we like. The schoolyard is full of laugh and life. As the name suggest, the Sunshine Sports activities make us sunshine boys and girls. Besides, we have a good understanding of sports, friendship as well as team spirit than before. Up to now, the activities had received high praise from both students and teachers.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning, everyone! It is my great honour to be here to share with you my opinions on how to learn well in school.
Firstly, we should learn to learn efficient. Personally, I used to trying effective method to achieve my academic goals. Develop a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot of to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with other. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithful that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, that were really helpful to build up our body and enrich our school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy colorful and meaningful life here.