增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\),划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known to all, build good relationships with others is critical in our society. When it comes about personal relationships, I’d natural think of my relationship with my mother. She often told me that I can be anyone I want, as long as I’m confidence of myself. She sees my talent and pushes me to do the best I possibly can. I respect for my mother so much for she treats me as an equal instead of child. She gives me the free to make mistakes and to learn from it. Unlike friendships what can fade and break, I know I’ll always be connected with my mother whatever I face.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday we were in a supermarket. It was Saturday, or most people were in casual clothes. A lady, who was in her late thirty, I thought, was wearing beautiful suit. My 10-year-old daughter Amy whispers: “Mum, I love that lady’s suit!” “Why not telling her about it?” I responded. Then I accompanied her to the lady.
“Excuse me. Madam. You look amazed today with this suit.” said Amy. The lady stopped for a minute and jumped with excite: “Oh thank you, you’ve made my day.”
Saying something nice can change the direction of someone’s day, what costs us nothing but means a lot of to them. Children don’t just automatic become kind adults — we need to teach and show them how.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(N),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandmother is in her eighty this year. Last month, I bought her smart phone specially designed for the elderly. I patiently teach her how to telephone or how to have a video chat with others on WeChat. I practiced again and again. She was very thrilling when she could chat on WeChat. She thought the smart phone was such powerful a tool. Now she has final mastered how to use the smart phone. To her delight, she can have a video chat with me on WeChat without being helped. She takes pride in herself because of she can keep up with the times. She no long feels lonely.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I’d like to sharing my volunteering experience at the Olympic Games. My main task was to help the athletes communicate reporters and medical staff. The languages in the great need were Russian, German, Chinese and Japanese. I could speak all the four language. During the competition I was free to watch the games, but I could talk with other volunteers, sharing with them their joy of volunteering. Before the competition, the players were interviewed where we worked. When the players entered the room, everything got crazily, especially when they win. Everyone wanted to ask them questions. And I will never forget the days when I spent with those kind people.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Sunday, Lin Feng, senior high student, was hanging out by the river. Just then a 72-year-old man loses his balance and fell into the water. Many people stood by and recorded that was happening on their phones. None of them were willingly to save the old man. Seeing the old man was in a bad situation, Lin Feng decided to help him with even though he was not good at swimming. The boy jumped into the river and failed to take him to the bank. He held the man up for 15 minute before he became too exhausting. Thankfully, others had joined her by then, and they carried them to safe.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You've made a wise choose to travel there. As we all know it, Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions, enjoy many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well-known as its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clearly and looks colorful. It can excite visitors' imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It is built twenty century ago. And it is still playing so important part in irrigation today. Beside, the nice weather and convenience transportation there can make your trip more enjoyable.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The classmate I want to thank most
In the past two years, I have been received lots of help from my dear classmates, among which, Wang Lin is the one I want to thank most.
Wang Lin, our monitor, is an active but optimistic young man. He likes playing football and piano. Being helpful, he always does everything in his power to help whomever needs help. I have every reason to expressing my sincere gratitude. Firstly, with his encouragement, I’ve become quite confident. Besides, I won’t have made such rapid progress in my studies without his help. Most important, it’s under his influence where I’ve become an excellent volunteer.
I’ve learned many good qualities from him and I’ll always be grateful with him for his generous help.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sort of photos in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exist some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is leaking privacy, that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Allan Stewart, a famous Australia legend, was born on March 7th, 1915. It makes him remarkable what he has experienced life of constant study. He acquired his first academic qualification in 1936. He devoted himself to medicine for several years, but he got a Doctor’s degree. Having been acquired two degrees, Allan Stewart continued to study law in her eighties. Successful, he got his master’s degree in 2006 when he was at the age of 91, the older one, creating a world record. His belief that one was never too late to learn made him succeed getting the fourth degree. Allan Stewart will encourage us to improve our spiritual life to reach great achievement in the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our class played an interesting game calling the jigsaw puzzle (七巧板). All of us expect it to be a very easy task. After 10 minute of trying, however, they couldn’t make any of the patterns at all.
Soon our team leader saw another group’s jigsaw puzzle piece and found it was an exact piece our group needed. It turned out what the task was not to be done by a single group, or needed us to borrow other groups’ different shapes. After we realized this, everything solved quickly. I learned a lot of from this activity. Only cooperation can make us successfully.