增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43. 3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82. 8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I am so exciting that I can’t wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first lesson in our school, that left me a deep impression. When I entered into the classroom, the students were making much noise. I stood at the door, not knew what to do at first. But soon I realized everything must be done. I asked the kids they liked the English songs. They all say “Yes”. I sang the English song. For my surprise, all the kids began to focus their attentions. All of them had a wonderful English lesson.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏宇符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear friends,
I, on behalf our school, would like to express our warm welcome to Mr. Ken Hyland, our distinguished guest. We are lucky to have him to visit our school.
Which is known to us all, being a world famous English linguist, he had written lots of books. I have read many of his books, included Discourse Studies, Teaching and Researching and so on. Today, the remarkable professor is invited to our school to deliver a lecture on English study, which is a opportunity for us to promote our English. Meanwhile, if you have any questions on English, you can ask him for help. I do believe his shining ideas will be benefit to you．
We wish you, all the guest here, good health and a pleasant journey. Now a wonderful lecture from Mr. Ken Hyland is eager expected and let’s express your sincere welcome once again．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Delighted to be informed the news that you have won first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulation to you.
I think you deserve a prize. For a long time, you had shown great interest in Chinese culture, especial Chinese calligraphy. I know you always refer to calligraphy books, learn from masters and keep practice writing Chinese characters. It’s your passion and hard work that contributes to you winning the championship. Hopefully, you can achieve even great success in the future.
Also, I hope you can make great progress in calligraphy together. Please tell me that when you are available so that we can exchange our experience of learning it. Looking forward to your early reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they make short journeys.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Ms Li,
I am very glad to have you as an our English teacher.
As the world is become a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English mean we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two mainly problems in my study are that I feel difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when spoken English. I really hoped that you can give me good advices on how to memorize new words. Other suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speak. I believe you can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua
文中共有 10 处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The person I would like to interview him is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only one of the greatest astronaut in the world but also the first Chinese go to space. I have long been interesting in space exploration. And I believe I could learn a greatly deal from him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him that made him become an astronaut or how he was trained. I would also like to know how he feel in space and whether space travel is as exciting as what is describing in some books. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about their personal life, which must be very different.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was getting dark, and my parents didn’t come back home yet. Thinking about the supper, I stopped doing my homework and decide to make a meal for my family instead of simple waiting. Since it was my first cooking, so I surfed on the Internet with my cellphone to get the detailed informations on how to do homely dishes. Followed the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish, then another. When my parents came back home, they couldn’t believe their eyes see the dishes made by me. While Mum was taken pictures, Dad couldn’t wait to have a taste and gave her the thumbs up. Imagine how exciting I was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry to say that I can’ t go to Heshun’s old town with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promises. Honestly speaking, I have be expecting to visit Heshun’s old town with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’ t travel recently because I hurt your leg in an accident. That is because I want to put away our travel. I would appreciate it if you could allow me fix another date. If it’s really convenience for you, shall we travel there this summer vacation? If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. As for me, Marie Curie was the person I respect most. It is general acknowledged that Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientist in the world. Her discoveries are crucial to the later scientific research.
Marie Curie was interesting in science when she was young. After she graduated from university, she committed himself to her work with the objective of serve the whole society. Marie and her husband found the element radium, for that they were awarded the Nobel Prize. Not only was Marie the first female professor at the University of Paris, but she was also the first scientist win two Nobel Prizes in the world.
Madam Curie was intelligent, brave, strong-willed but never gave up. To sum up, she is a person I respect her most.
