The person I admire most is my father. Strict while he may be,he never fails to show his care and consideration. Once I carelessly broke a neighbor’s window while played football in the street. Seen nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad comes home, he noticed my uneasiness and asked me that had happened. I could only tell him the truth. Rather than scold me,he praised me for my honest and encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor. Later that day, I went to the neighbor’s house. I told him the truth and apologized to my fault, promising fix his window. I realized that not only do Dad take care of our health but he also teaches us how to be good citizen.
1. It was just then when I began to worry about my safety
2. In a word, success is important, and so does failure, because it's the mother of success.
3. My dear friends, don't afraid of problems, but take advantage of them to be the best of ourselves.
4. There has a big library in our school.
5. That's all. Thank you. Some questions?
1. Hard work have made him very ill.
2. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and a fish was caught.
3. Generally speaking, when take according to the directions, the drug has no side effects.
4. Never before do I seen such a wonderful park, where I'd like to pay a visit again.
5. In front of our school stand a tower on whose top we can have a clear view of the lake.
6. They were two reasons for the decision.
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My bicycle went wrong again. Tired with repairing it again and again, I decide to buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack.
The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked such cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeeper told us that it was the lately bicycle. He wanted to charge me 800 yuan, that was too expensive for me. I just couldn’t afford for such an expensive one. Then I chose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, and it was much better than the old one.