增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起），不计分。
Today, together with my classmates I went on a school trip, where I think was interesting. Our destination was the City Science Museum. We get up earlier than before, and we took a bus to go there. It wasn’t far, so they arrived there soon. At the museum, I learnt a lot about robots. I felt exciting that the robot could help do much houseworks. Then a staff member showed how make a model robot. I’ll send the photos about the robots taking there to my friends. Before we returned, and I went to the gift shop where I bought some gifts with my family. How a happy school trip I had!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took a trip to China a few months before. It was a wonderful experience where is beyond description. We spent three weeks visit Beijing, Shanghai and several other tourist attraction. The closer we approached the center of China, the much I liked it. Then we went to Hong Kong last week, which I think is different with Beijing. It is noisiest place I have ever seen. And another thing that give me a deep impression was the people in China—they were so much friendly. Anyway, the trip itself was interested. I can't wait to flying to China again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分.
On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great variety of robot. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, including playing chess, playing piano and drawing pictures. What's more, the robots are in different kinds and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition, that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced just as if we were dancers on the stage. By visit Robot World, I have learned a lot about robots, especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is so powerful that it makes us to feel more comfortable to live in the world.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, when I lived in Germany, I decided to go shopping and I drive into downtown. I was very pleased because I found out a parking space immediately. It was rather unusual. I did my shopping, that only took half an hour and I went back to my car. To my absolutely horror, it was no longer on the ground but it was in air. I really did not know what to do at that point but I went to the police station. The policeman were very kind to me. They told me I parked into the entrance to a car park and as a result, everybody could get out of the car park. Then I wanted to laugh and cried at the same time. It made me embarrassing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am extreme happy to know you are coming to our school next semester as an exchange students. I even can’t wait to meet you.
When it comes to learn traditional Chinese painting, you are very lucky. Our school had set up various optional courses, Chinese painting including. The students meet on every Wednesday afternoon from 3pm. to 5pm. With the professional teacher’s help, not only can you improve your skill, but also you will make many friends. That you have to do is register on our website. Besides, tools like Chinese brush, ink and paper is also necessary. If there is anything else I can help, be free let me know.
Looking forward to your arrival.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Collecting stamps are my favorite, which benefits me a great deal of. For me, a stamp is not a piece of paper merely , and a record of history. A stamp tells me about the time, place and country of their origin. In my spare time, I always arrange the stamps and sticking them properly in an album. Now I have three albums of stamps, which I looked after carefully. I enjoy the beautiful of these stamps. I come know about the history, geography, and culture of a country from the stamps. I am proudly of myself to be in love with the hobbies.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Father's Day is coming. At first， that I want to do is to buy a bunch of flowers for my dad to express my thank for his hard work to bring me up a little card will be attached with the flowers， said "Happy Father's Day!" Considering that my dad is busy with his work that he often forgets to do exercise， I intended to accompany him to work out in the nearest gym from our home after the meal. As far as I know， the gym is well equipping and offers service of highly quality. After returning back home， I shall read the letter I write in advance to her.
I hope my dad will have a happy Father's Day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old freshman. I am very interest in the position in your poster. So I’m writing to recommend me to you as a member of the school TV station.
When in senior high school, I am once a journalist of the school newspaper. That is why I’m good at writing now. The reports writing by me are often praised by many of her fellow classmates and teachers. In addition, working as a journalist help me to grow as a outgoing, independent, and sociable person. More importantly, I am so curious and enthusiastic about is happening in and around our campus that I can keep it up with the latest events. I’m sure I will devote myself to working in the school TV station whole-hearted.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One morning that I was in primary school, I tried cooking for first time. As my parents weren’t in, I have to cook something to eat. I took an egg from the refrigerator, putting some oil in the pan and cracked an egg into it. After a few second, I tried to turn the egg over in case it would get burnt. Unexpectedly, it caught fire. Not known what to do, I screamed but rushed out of the kitchen. After a while, I realized I should put out the fire, so I returned back, only to find something but a black burnt egg. I’ve learned that I can’t be too carefully while cooking.
