增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Inviting by my uncle living in another city,I couldn’t wait to pay visit to his family by train last summer. As I am about to climb up the stairs at the railway station,a lady had caught my attention. She was havinga hard time get her wheelchair up the stairs.I immediate went to help the lady, that gladly accepted my help. When I took her wheelchair up,a young man offered to help me carry my big heavy bag.I late went up to him and expressed my thank. He said with a cheerful smile in his face,“By serving others, we can spread love and kindness.”
I'm a booklover but like sharing my love for books！So I've been bought books constantly. Finishing reading one book，I placed it in my school so that some of my schoolmate can enjoy themselves when reading it. I especial like placing it on a stone table in the little garden that students might have time to take a rest. I was delighted when I saw the card left on the table to say thanks the other day. And from the card，I knew my book turned out of to be a birthday gift for a strange girl. It was so lovely find out that my book could bring anyone pleasure！
One day, I was studying at home while I heard a loud noise. I went out to see what had happened. That I saw made me scaring. A building was on the fire. Some people were using water put out the fire. A few people jumped out of the window. Besides, those who were still on the second floor were crying for help. The people outside don't know how to help them. Firefighters arrived at last and we fought the fire bravely. Then the people inside was taken out. They were serious injured and were taken to the hospital at once.
Thanks for the firefighters, the people were saved and the fire was put out in the end.
In a different evening of November two years ago, we had a big party to celebrate Thanksgiving Day in the Concert Hall in our school. Present at the party was all the students and teachers, apart from some of the school leaders. Working together on stage, the teachers and students gave a lot of wonderfully American performances. For an example, they cooperated with each other perform witty skits（滑稽短剧）as well as singing and dancing. To our surprises, they also played magic tricks. The performances were very amazing that we all had a good time that evening.
Therefore, happy time really flies. The moment finally comes when the party came to an end. We are looking forward to get together to perform again.
When we were played basketball yesterday, a quarrel about a ball happens between Li Lei and Li Ming. Thank to the classmates there, the quarrel stopped after it developed into a fight.
We had our P. E. lesson in the fourth period on yesterday morning. The teacher asked us to play basketball, so we ten students divided us into two teams. Li Lei and Li Ming were on same team. As Li Ming didn’t catch the ball that Li Lei passed on to him, Li Lei began to get annoying and made some cruel word. And then they began to quarrel with each other.
In my opinion, we shouldn’t quarrel with each other at all. We are friends and we should cherish our friendship so that we can live happy.
I, together with my father, went to Zhangjiajie this summer vacation, where they paid a visit to Zhangjiajie National Forest Park. In 1982, it listed as the first national forest park of China, that covers an area of 48. 1 square kilometers. Zhangjiajie, lie in the northwest of Hunan Province, is one of the most important tourism city. What’s more, it was recognized for China’s excellent tourism city in 2000. We were deep impressed by the natural scenery there. Therefore, we had kept on taking photos. In my opinion, a journey was worthwhile, because we were tired.
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do that we want to do. Besides, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. About a month ago, I sign up for an English speech contest. I spent hours work out a schedule. After that, I set out to read wide, wrote the draft(草稿) of my speech and practiced my pronunciation. In addition to, I tried my best to improve my public speech skills. As result, I won first prize in the contest. I knew my success came from good planning or hard work. From then on, I attach more importances to not only planning what I am going to doing but also carrying out the plan firmly.
Now I want to tell you something what happened last weekend. On my way to the cinema，I noticed a foreigner talk to a policeman who seemed able to understand what the foreigner was saying. They two looked very worriedly. So I went up to see what I could do help them. I told the policeman a foreigner had lost his wallet and camera. Finally the foreigner got back his belonging with the help of the policeman. All of them thanked me. By the time I arrived at the cinema，the film have been over. Although I'd missed the film，but I was very happy because I had helped others with my efforts.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
John began digging in his garden after breakfast on Friday morning. He dug and dug. After half an hour all of sudden he found a coin near his foot. He was pleasing. He put it in his right pocket. A few minutes late, he found another one. He put them in the same pocket, too. The same thing was happened time after time. He was such happy that he went on digging and finding some more coins. However, just when he begins to dig again, he felt something cold in his trousers. They ran down one of his leg. He put his hand down quick, and the coins came into his hand. Now he knew there was a hole in his pocket.
Challenges of life are of great important in our growth. It reminds me of my days which I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school. It was the first time I have lived away from my home, so I found difficult to fit in. And the training officer was strict on me. I once thought I couldn’t stick to the end. But final, I made it. The training made it much easy for me to adapt to my future life. And the difficulties I came across have now became a precious memory in my life.
In a short, it’s better to learning to regard the challenges of life as the stepping stone to future success and make the best of them.
