增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：用斜线划去该词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city as well as. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done a lot for me, or I think it is time that I should do anything special to express my thanks.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的问。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限-词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to celebrated National Day and the Mid-Autumn Festival, and we had an 8-day holiday. After it, my classmates and I were talking about how to do during the holiday excitedly. Then we decided to go to help the farmers instead of stay at home. As soon as we arrived at farm, we were attracted by the apples hanging on the branches. We couldn't wait to pick the apples, which were the most interesting work. Particular, we were allowed to choose what we liked best and taste them. We didn't feel boring at all even though the job was tiring. We worked for 5 hours happily unless the sun set.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This story was happened ten years ago. I was traveling with my parent during winter vacation. We were in a very large shopping center, and I was so excited to see such huge place. Suddenly I turned around to ask my mom and dad something, but they were gone. I don't know which direction they went. I looked for them in difference places, but I couldn't find them. I was so nervously that I began crying and shouting loudly. Heard that, a lady came up to us and asked if I was OK. Then she told the customers through a loudspeaker that a little boy with a blue coat or a red hat was lost. Two minutes late, my mom and dad came running toward me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Monday yesterday. My friend Li Hua went to school with his homework unfinishing. He played online games all through the weekend. It was too late when he founded he had homework to do. To avoid punished, he told his teacher that a dog eats his homework. Obviously, it was just an excuse he made to cover the fact which he hadn’t done his homework. The teacher certainly knew about that and made them stay after school. Sometimes we think we can avoid trouble by making excuse when we do something wrongly. Therefore, we are really making problems worse instead of.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I once had a bad experience. One day several years ago, I went shop with my friends. As I entered a small shoe store, but I saw two women selecting shoes. Suddenly they raise their voice and began to talk loudly about how beautifully the shoes were and how low the price was. Just then an old couple walked onto the shop. The two women urged her to buy a pair. When the couple left a store with the shoes, I noticed the shop owner give the two women some cashes. He also promised offer them more unless more people bought his shoes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
Last week, I went to Guangzhou with my friends. We were so exciting about the trip. It took us three hours go to Guangzhou railway station. At first, we were confused about what to get out of the railway station. Then they saw a big sign, that showed us where to take the subway. When we got to the subway station, a largely picture was shown in the front of us, and we figured out our way quickly. When we were on the subway, we never think it ran so quickly. We just spent ten minute reaching our destination, but we found our hotel soon.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My name is Ann. I’ve been in China in a few years. With the help of Li Hua, a good friend of mine, I’ve been used to live in China. Li Hua, like other girls, are beautiful and lively. We became friends after we meet each other a few years ago. Although her English isn’t easy to understand, but we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about ours favorite books. We’re both surprising that Chinese culture and American culture are such different. Now we are planning nice party for next Sunday. There, I will introduce Li Hua to my friends, whom also have great interest in Chinese culture.
Dear Jack,
I’m pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experiences with you during the past summer.
In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket. I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met. Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people.
Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.
Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.
Best wishes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This was my five day at the summer camp.This morning I went down to the nearby river to fish, and the only thing I caught was a tree branch.In the afternoon, there were different activities they were planned to make us happy.In the evening, everyone was giving a task to get dinner readily.I was in the charge of preparing hot dogs, but I dropped them in the fire.Other kids couldn't stop laughing, but I still tried my best finish the task.However, the best part of the camp is at night when we sat around a camp fire and told story.What an interested summer camp!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I was invited Sam's home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. We two quarreled severely two month ago, so I was embarrassed and didn't know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Then I realize that Sam had arranged the dinner on purpose. I went up to her and greeted him warmly, smile at him. He looked very happily and talked to me for a long time. That night, we had a great fun together.
