增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt that cell phones play a important part in our daily life. However, be addicted to cell phones does a lot of harms to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cellphone, your head as well as your neck ache, which will have a bad effect to your daily life. Beside, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focus on the cell phone, you may fail to notice the traffic around us, which will be a great danger to you. Therefore, I strong suggest that everyone would use our cell phones wisely.
Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax, and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities. Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies. But if students feel tired, they can’t pay attention to that they’re studying. They will be in a bad health. It’s also not good for his studies. In my opinions, it’s important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Then they will enjoy better health and work hard. So please pay more attention to student health and growth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many students are unwilling to do housework at home, say that they are too busy studying. However, in my opinion, students should spend some time help with housework. Here are some reason. If we left all the housework to our parents, it will make them very much tired. For our part, being independent is really benefit . As a matter fact, the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. Doing housework can help us to learn to look after us. Now we are no long small children, but we ought to help with housework to reduce our parents’ burdens.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have recently been told that listen to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I’m sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she had turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gives a party she doesn’t have to invite a rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered certain electronic sounds have strangely effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze (瘫) with their legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to neighbor someday.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏宇符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜袋(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the past few decade,there have been a dramatic increase in the number of people study abroad .Although studying abroad can bring great benefits,I think the disadvantages to young people are greater.To begin with,many students which study abroad face great economic pressure.Tuition fees and living expenses is much more expensive than at home and could end up costing most families a arm and a leg. Studying in China is much more convenience,it’s also can help save to money.Another importance factor to consider is the tremendous pressure.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school has regularly rest hours for students. However, we can often see many students do their lessons or other things before bedtime. They usually stay up until midnight.
Teenagers need enough sleep daily. Stay up late may not only do harm to their health, but also make students later for class or sleepy in class. Thus, they miss everything they should have learned.
It is blameless to stay up once in while if we do have to take up our rest time for some urgent things, so don’t make it a habit. It is advised that young people had better not stay up late, that we should bear in minds. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We really need it to make a change to the unhealthy lifestyle so as to ensure our rest time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( ^ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Phones, computers and TV sets are great resources for getting information and lots of funs for entertainment. However, we can be harmful and some people needed help to break away from them. Even if people are chatting on their phones, but they can still feel lonely. Reducing screen time mean people can connect with their family and friends in the really world. Beside, it’s also a great chance for people to go outside and be active, that is good for their health. Too much screen time can result other problems. It is necessary for people to set limits and learn to live without play with their devices.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because of its advantages. Online shopping save us a lot of valuable time. What’s more, there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from, which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenient to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, so the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisements on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes, the customers are easily cheating.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoying the convenient of online shopping.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some students think high of live-streamed lessons, which make learning more flexible, when others point to the many disadvantages such as low efficiency. As far as I am concerning, live-streamed lessons are only good for extremely self-disciplined students, but do no good to those lacked in self-control. Firstly, many students cannot stop themselves from playing their phones, which influenced their learning efficiency. Secondly, students need an environment which they are motivated to be devoted to learning, but live-streamed lessons do not provide us with such an environment. To sum up, live-streamed lessons what have a lot of disadvantages and is not fit for all.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we know, a number of the elderly living alone has increased incredible fast in recent years. Main reason include the old people’s preference for freedom, family relocation, the decline of multi-generational families and urban growth. As a consequence, some society problems have already been arisen among them such as loneliness, lack of care and survival difficulty. Therefore, it is our duty to caring about the old in terms their physical health and feelings. As young people, we should often go home and visit them besides make phone calls. In addition, we can try to keep us company no matter how old we were.
