增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
China is serious suffering from unbalanced ratio of sex. According to public information, the crisis started in 1982, where sex ratio in birth was 108.47. Since then, the figure had been growing crazily but reached 115 in 1994. In 2004, it reached at the peak at 121.2, with some provinces at 130, which was an serious deviation from the normal figure. Some researchers predict what around 2020, the population of bachelors in China will be same as the population of Australia. And these man may stay single forever .
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last year summer I went to London for holiday. I spent just a week there. While I am staying there, I visited many places of interest and had lots of friendly talks with all kinds of people. I found very interested thing there. One of my Chinese friends who have been living in London told me that many English families didn’t like to buy new television set. There are many shops where can lend you TV sets. The shops are often filled by a great many people. They can borrow a set very easy, and it costs us only a little. Then it can be taken away and use for long.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Because of the reason as is known to all, many people are no longer going out seeing movies. Otherwise, they are watching films at home. Some studio have even put on their major films online. Movie theaters are fun. But do we still need it? There’s big difference between going to a movie theater and watching a movie at home. When people will go to a theater, they can enjoy the movie without getting bothered for anything that they have to do at home. If theaters stay opened, they can hire more people. Then new workers can get paid and made a living. That will help the economy recovers.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
I'm written to tell you about the discussion we've had about that entrance fees should be charged for parks. There are two different opinions about a question.
60% of the students were against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be freely. People need a place to rest and enjoy them. Charging entrance fees will keep some people away. And it will become unnecessary build gates and walls, which will be harmful to the appearance of a city.
However, 40% of the students think that fees should be charged because of money is needed to pay gardeners and other worker and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, therefore, fees shouldn't be charged too high.
Yours,
Tom
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The idea of sustainable development has accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development is of a big problem facing our planet. The present situation is worried. First, natural resources is becoming fewer than before. Second, as some people are not aware of the important of the environmental protection, the problems with it remain extreme serious to some degree. To their great joy, many country have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and regulations but put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. On an other hand popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out. As for me, I should take the responsibility to devote me to sustainable development.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
As is often the case, when people are attending meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find it addicted to their phones, completely ignore others. This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is because smartphones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games but keep in touch with friends through QQ and We Chat. However, too many exposure to phones is bad for people in term of health. Moreover, people who were engaged in phones fail to communicate well those around them.
As far as I'm concerned, people should wise make use of their phones to help with their work and study.
In addition to, they should care more about their family members and friends rather than smartphones.
Though a great progress has been made in science these years, there are still many people live in poor conditions. They make their lives by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”
Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Internet has taken control of the planet in these days. Making friends online is another freshly new way of social communication.
What everyone knows, making friends online is convenient. We can click on a mouse to contact others with eyes fixing on the screen. Except that, making friends online can save large amounts of time, and all the information we need are through the cable. Therefore, to the best of myself knowledge, every coin has two sides. Making friends online can also do harm to us. Information posted online may fake and the link can install massive virus packages in our computers to stealing the passwords or bank accounts. Hackers may use our curious to blackmail us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city because I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs around us is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we will regret it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, no one is willing to help a old man when he fell down in the street. The people who stands nearby run away in a hurry instead lending a hand. Even the policeman doesn’t know why he should help him. It is truly that many people are afraid to help old people who fall down nowadays because they are worrying that they may get into trouble. And if the old people are your relatives or your friends, what should you do? Helping other is helping yourselves. So I hope more people are willing to offer a helping hand when seeing someone in troubles.
