增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
For many us, travelling to strange places and meeting new people can be difficulty. Jim Hawking, the young hero in Louis’ adventure novel Treasure Island, experienced the challenge.
At the start, Hawking is a shy boy which only knows the safety of his family home. Frightening by the old seaman Pew, Hawking runs to his mother with protection. Therefore, events force him to leave his home and start a adventure. As he meets new problems, we see off Hawkins start to think for himself, taking chances and make tough choices.
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It is my son’s birthday two days ago. As I didn’t buy any gift for him, I gave him ＄10 for a birthday gift. Last evening he used it take his cousin out for ice cream. It was turned out that these two kids were the last one to the shop of the day. So the lady at the cash register who wanted to cash out quick told them their ice cream was freely！They were exciting to hear it. Then I asked my son why he did with the money. To my joyful, he said that he gave it to the homeless man.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的同。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Five years ago, my mom got sick and my dad had to gave up his bread business. After my mom became better, my dad chose to get back into the bread business again. He worked hardly to set up his shop and get everything ready, so no one came to buy bread. I decide to encourage people stop by the shop to buy some bread and cheer my dad up. So I created a post on the Internet say, “My dad is sad because no one is coming to his new bread shop.” Where I stopped by my dad's shop the following day, the line was very long that people were standing outside. My post got shared many time and my dad's business soon got much more bigger than I expected.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I had drove my car to see a doctor. At the hospital parking lot, I tried to back the car into the space, and failed. I just got my driving licenses and was not skilled at operating it. As more cars lining up behind me and some drivers even yelled at me, I got nervously and worse at handling it. When I was about to quit and left, a man walked up to me. She offered to back my car. Then he suggested equip the car with a camera so that it would be easy to park it. I was relieved that he lent me hand and I was grateful for which he had done for me.
