增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I watched a movie, naming A Dog’s Way Home from Sony Pictures, what mainly tells about dogs at animal shelters. Through the movie, I learned that much of those dogs have to be put to the death if they aren’t adopted. The followed day I told my parents that I wanted to visit to the animal shelter in our city and take a dog home. They strong supported my idea of adopting a dog and we choose a brown one at last. I hope that more dogs at animal shelters can find their permanently home. I also hope that dog owner will keep their pets instead giving them up.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I went to a animal hospital to help the doctors there. I arrived at the hospital early in the morning, And there were already much work to do:giving the pets food and water,and even giving them kisses on the heads.
At first , they looked at me with frightening eyes. A doctor say to them,”Don’t worry,and everything will be OK.” I washed a dog’s hurt leg. I worked careful t make sure I didn’t hurt him. I wished he could know we were just trying help him. It was a long day and the work made me tired,and I was very happy. I knew I loved animal. And the animals knew I loved him . They enjoyed about my care with love!
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改只限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I have a photo that is of great important to me. In the photo, I was playing the ping-pong happily with my father. I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained him hard, even though he was tiring after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt such sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sit quietly with me. The next morning, I find a piece of paper that said, “Never give up, dear. I am pride of you.”
Now I spend less time on ping-pong because my busy studying schedule. But I will never forget which my father told me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week our class vote on what to do for our class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the night Safari（夜间动物园）.Our girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we were in the minority, we lost the boys, who all wanted the safari. We got the admission rate for students, which was greatly since I still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as everything at the souvenir shop. The Safari was scary but really a fun. As we took the ride over the park's dark jungle, we could see the eyes of many creatures look out at us. Most of the animals here sleep when there is sunlight and wake up at night.
