增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
One day,my cousin Tom was driving in another city with a friend while they had a car accident and got hurt. Tom was seriously injury and couldn’t drive to hospital. They needed help,so they knew no one in the city. Then they see a couple with two kids coming to them. Know they needed help,the couple helped them get out of the car with help of their kids. Then they sent him to hospital. They stayed here until they were able to leave for the hospital. Later through a talk with the family,Tom learnt the family were taking a vacation in the city. They spent their times helping others. How kind they were!
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用横线(—)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: ⑴ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
⑵ 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
People have strange ideas about food. For example, tomato is a kind very delicious vegetable. It is one of useful plant that can be prepared in many ways. It has rich nutrition(营养) and vitamin in it. But in the 18th century, Americans never eat tomatoes. They grew them in their gardens because of tomato plants are so pretty. But they thought the vegetable was poisonous. They called tomatoes “poison apples”.
President Thomas Jefferson, but, knew that tomatoes were good to eat. He was a learning man. He had been to Paris, which he learned to love the taste of tomatoes. He grew many kinds of tomatoes in their garden. The President taught his cook a way for a cream of tomato soup. This beautiful pink soup was served at the President party. The guests thought the soup tasted really well . They never thought their president would serve his honored guests poison apples. Jefferson never spoke with his honored guests about the fact.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
13. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
One afternoon, I finished painting and went to the girls’ bathroom to wash my mess brushes. I noticed that a girl was standing alone in the bathroom, silently weep. I approach her and asked that she was okay. She told me the problems she met. In order to put her with ease, I told her that she wasn’t alone but that I would do all I could to help her. When she left, I also gave her my phone number and made her to promise to text us that night. We ended up text most of the night. As result, she thanked me the next morning and told me that she would cheer up.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss what we were going to do on the weekend. We came up with several ideas such going to a park, climbing a mountain, and go boating. Finally, we decided to climb a mountain where is close to our school.
The next day, we left early in the morning. Along the way, we enjoyed the warm sunshines and beautiful nature. However, when we reached the mountain top, we were shocking to see rubbish here or there. Then we asked the other tourists to join in us to pick up the rubbish.
We collect and put the rubbish in our paper bags. They were tired but felt very happily.
假定英语课上老师要求用桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
1. 只允许修改10处,多者。
This morning at about nine o'clock, I was on my way the supermarket.Suddenly I see heavy smoke rising about several hundreds meters away.“There must be a fire!” I thought.Getting nearer, I saw a shop was on fire.There was many people standing by the roadside watched.Six firefighters were struggling to put out the fire.I heard someone say they had fought for about an hour and two firefighters had rushed into the shop to rescue a woman.After a while, they rushed out support the woman.But one firefighter got injured serious.All the people and I whom saw what happened were deeply moved by their bravery.About twenty minutes late the fire was finally put out.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, my father and I were walking on the road when we noticed the man driving by very slowly. Suddenly, his car ran off the road into a tree. We immediate reached through the broken window and turned the engine. We tried talking to him but getting no response. Fearing he might be choking, we struggle to get him out of the car. As soon as we got him out, we laid him on his sides and he started shaking. Then, I called 120 while my father continued trying to talk to me. After the ambulance arrived, and the staff took him to hospital. My father said what proud he was of me for not be afraid to help.
When the accident was happened, I was standing near a bus stop. There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella. The bus soon arrived. There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady couldn’t get on. A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away. Unluckily, the old lady’s umbrella was caught by the door. He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear. The bus pulled her along the road. Finally, she fall to the ground. Several minutes late, the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I thought it was the driver should be responsible for the accident.