I’ll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my grandpa, my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily. When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with our grandpa. We felt not a little excitedly. After a while, in the yard was some snowmen, all look funny. “Look, here’s another snowman,” shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his hand. It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there this year!
I have had the pleasure of meeting a nice neighbor since my family move to the new community. We usual just wave and say hi when we meet. Therefore, an incident changed this. The other day, a heavier rain hit our area. With strong winds blowing throughout the day, a part of his wooden fence, about 6 foot of it, came down. When I was wondering what to get it repaired, he gave me a hand. With his help, the fence was fixed quickly. It was kind act by my neighbor and I was touching by his kindness. I will soon send to him a thankyou note.
Li Hua
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Jumping rope is one of the best form of aerobic exercise, which can be easy done at home without expensive equipment. It has been enjoying an boom in popularity among adults since the pandemic lockdowns begin.
Research has been shown that a regular jumping rope routine strengthens the entirely body by simultaneously shaping muscles in the legs, arms, and abdomen. It also protects the heart and improves coordination and balance, that help to prevent falls. Just remember that landing put a lot of force on your legs, so if you give them a try, build up gradually from shorter to longer sessions and wear well-cushioned shoes avoid injury.
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Last month I invited to make a model of the Temple of Heaven for a show. When I was halfway through, my father made it to show me about what it looked like. It looked quite nicely. However, I was not willing to starting over even though I knew my father idea would work better. At a show, most students’ models were much more beautiful than mine. I asked some of them how they make the models that well. They said their parents helped them. My father said I was so close-minded to accept his help. And I wanted to work by myself. Do you think I should have turned to my father?
I love sports. My friends and I often play football in my out-of-class activities. Today I finish my PE test. As a boy I was joined in two parts, the long jump and the 1000m race. I was better at the 1000m race, where took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds. But I didn’t do well at the long jump. I only jumped 4.5 meter. I love sports so much because they can not only make my body stronger, and also let me keep optimistic all the time. While exercised, I can get a strong sense of successful. I can get excited and confident. In word, sports are my favorites.
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When it comes to music, here is what I think: Music is one of the most important part in my life. The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress, but brought me pleasure. Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfort. I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions. While prepared for the coming day, I love listening to music as my regular morning routine. Also, I am planning to learn to play piano. My life with songs and harmonies would be complete empty.
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注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The history of painting in China is long or full of masterpieces from different ages when have their own unique styles.
Truly artistic paintings other than calligraphy (书法) came into exist during the Qin Dynasty and matured in the Wei and Jin periods. It were in the Tang Dynasty that it developed more quicklier than any other previous period. An art continued to advance during the Song and Yuan Dynasties with an increased focus such subjects as mountains and animals. Traditional painting techniques lasted until the end of the Qing Dynasty, when modern painting techniques started off to challenge the traditional one. Although modern paintings had been heavily influenced by the West, they still value traditional painting techniques.
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After leaving a store, I returned to my car, only find that I’d locked my keys and cell phone outside. A boy which rode his bike saw me kick a tire and say a little choice words. “What’s wrong?” he was asked. I explained my situation. “But even if I could call my wife,” I said anxious, “she can’t bring me her car key, since this is our only car.” He handed me her cell phone. “Call your wife and tell her I’m going to get her key.” “That is a seven-mile round trips.” “Don’t worry about it.” An hour later, he returned with the key. I offered him some money, and he refused. “Let’s just say I needed the exercise,” he said. Then, like an cowboy in the movies, he rode off into the sunset.
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注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have taken part a voluntary organization recently. It is set up last year to provide left-behind children with birthday gifts. It is hardly for them to receive birthday gifts from their parents why their parents leave home to work in big cities. Besides, we volunteers will make a list of these children’s birthday wishes. After read the list, we try our best to get the gifts they really want. Some kids hope for the pair of new shoes or several books as his birthday gifts. I’d like to these kids to receive the very gifts they wish. I sincere hope each one will have a nice birthday.
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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We all like honest people, but not all people are honest with us. So it must be great that there is the day to ask everybody be honest. M. Hirsh Goldberg, a write, started Honesty Day. He chose the last day of April like Honesty Day because the first day was April Fool Day.
Be honesty. That’s all you have to do on Honesty Day. On this day, anyone can ask for you any question and you should give a true answer. Every Honesty Day, Mr. Goldberg gives prize to honest groups and people to praise his honesty.
Mr. Goldberg wrote a book on telling lies. He said actual everyone tells lies. That is why he set up Honesty Day.
