增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I remember clearly that when I was on my eighteen birthday, my father gave me a present-a picture book. The colorfully pictures and the stories in the book make me excited. “My dear son,” he said, “to be a great man, you have to read a plenty of books.” From now on, I started to make friend with all kinds of books.
Books opened a window to the beautiful world in front of my eyes. In books, I met a variety great people. Now, I have grown up. My bookshelf is filling with books, among that is the little picture book given to me by my father. I’ll continue finding books to read. Read books is for me just like chatting with my best friend.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错误的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限—词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, almost all the school staff and student in our school have paid a visit to Hanyangling Museum. It is about 10 kilometers away from our school.
We started off at 8：00 am from our school gate, so the whole journey took us two hours. We visited the museum about ten o'clock. when features the history of our hometown. Be-sides, we enjoyed the beautifully scenery outdoors. Before having some photos taking and a picnic together, we returned to school on foot. Though the hike made us tiring, it provided us with a opportunity to take in the area’s great winter scenery.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Tree Planting Day on last Thursday, my classmates and I went to plant trees in a park where is in the west end of the city. In the morning, we gathered at the school gate and went thereby bikes, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrive, we began to work immediate. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and plant young trees. Others were watering it. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people protect the trees. Before leaving we take some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we both had a sense of achievement.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Learning English is not so difficulty. I’m glad to give you some advices. First of all, be brave to express you in class. Speaking with others can great improve your fluency. Speaking is not about how large your vocabulary is. On a contrary, it is about how well you can use the words you know. Second, read as many as possible. There are many things can be learnt while reading. It was not until you read them for many times that you’ll be able to write English correctly yourself. But in order to write well, you’d better to remember some good sentences and structures.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, my presentation is about David, a online illustrator (插图画家), and his paintings. David is fond of China’s national treasure, the giant panda. Recently, he has combined the panda image with various internationally famous paintings, caused Internet excitement. He has been planning to do this creative paintings for some time, and is glad what so many people like his paintings, After all, Chinese giant pandas were born to be models and can be easily adapted so many oil paintings. He pays attentions to Chinese traditional paintings, and western masterpieces as well as. He strongly believe that the Chinese panda matches good not only the Chinese style elements but also the world culture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
.2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr. Gao lives next to my home. He is a teacher. He teaches PE in a famous middle school, where is one of the key school in our city. He has been teaching there for ten years. He is very patient on his students and his lessons are interested and lively. As a result, he is highly appreciated by his students. He often tells them pay attention to our health. And he asks them to work out regular. His son, Gao Bo, was my good friend and we often study together. Sometimes Mr. Gao plays the basketball with us after school. In summer, he often takes us to the swimming pool or teaches us to swim.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I’m surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I always dreamed traveling on my own. But my parents worried about me all the time. They thought I might have trouble solve the problems I met. In order to comfort him ,I decided to travel with a friend and they agreed. It take me just two minutes to book two train ticket from my hometown to Nanjing, paying with Alipay. I also downloaded an app which was using to help me find the hotel easy. We spent several days in Nanjing and visited the number of old museums, that contained many beautiful paintings. Although this was the first time that I had left home, but I really had a good time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information online, so they can surf the Internet for any information they need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information online that is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harms to health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It’s of great importance separate good plants from wild weeds.
10 . 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As it is known to us, fewer and fewer students do sports regular, which makes them weak and easily tired.
There have many reasons for this. First of all, some of the students complain that they have too many homework, result in less time to take exercise. Beside, some of them think that it is very difficult for them to keep doing exercise, because it is very hard thing.
For lack of physical activities, many students were in poor health. I suggest that our school must take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter what busy we are, it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise.
