增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其正下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词正下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词,请严格按照要求格式修改。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone needs help. Often there are some cases that we help ourselves indirect in helping others. Last month, Tom asked for me to help with his math. In order to help him, I go over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To his surprise, some difficult problems that I could not understand before worked out by myself. After a month, with my help, Tom made great progresses in math, too. Such a experience enabled me to realize that help others also does good to ourselves. So when others is in trouble, never hesitate to help them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandmother were born on a farm in New York. At 20, she left home and worked as a housekeeper in a painter’s house until she married with my grandfather at 27. A couple farmed for most of their lives, first in Virginia and then in New York. In my grandmother’s late seventy, she made a decision learn to paint. She said she just wanted to keep busily, though she had had that dream since she first saw his former employer paint. A few years late, her hard work finally paid off. Her pictures were first selling at a local market and were soon noticed by a businessman, which bought everything she painted.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,从第11处起不计分。
Now I still remember my working experiences in a cafe last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a drink. However, that attracted my attention was not the menu, but a notice it said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements but thought maybe I could have a try. On arriving home, I talk to my parents about getting a part. time job in the cafe during the summer vacation and they strong supported me. Determing to challenge myself, I went to the interview. Fortunately, I passed it and I was really proud of me!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week our teacher announced that a Chinese Character Dictation Competition will be held in the auditorium on July 3. Many of us were interested and hoped to join in it, and only one competitor was allowed for each class. Luckily, I got chance.
In the following days, I busied me preparing for the competition. My classmates gave me a lot of good advices. As the competition was approaching, I felt more and more confident. The day finally came. Some characters were very challenging that many of the competitors got stuck while I succeeded on writing down most of them and won first prize. When I was standing excited on the stage, pictures of my classmates helps me flashed into my mind. The victory and honor were belonged to all of us.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,从第11处起不计分。
High school is a golden time in our life with great fun and fond memory. I will never forget those days that we enjoyed ourselves in all kinds of activities. It is no doubt that we have developed abilities and harvested friendship through them. More important, I am lucky to have been met many lovely teachers. They taught me not only how to study, and also how to be a good person. It will not be long until I graduate. Therefore, as student in Senior 3, I want to express my gratefulness to my teachers. It is with her help that I have grown up and been ready to catch up with the rapidly changed world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
What is the difference between a good athlete and a great one?
A sports psychologist suggests there are three things that all great athletes have on common. First, they were not afraid to compete other people. Second, great athletes are those which are positive about them and their abilities. Great athletes know that how to deal with stress. They are unable to cut out things in daily life that adds to their stress, such as unhealthy food or bad friendships. Finally, great athletes have the mental strength to focus on which is the most important.
Great athletes set a example to us not only in how to play sports well but also in how to live well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I believe I will benefit a lot of from the overseas exchange experience. Firstly, not only will my speaking English be improved and also my communication skills will be developed. Besides, I can stayed with a local family to get a taste of living in a difference culture. I eager to learn about the culture of other countries, that can broaden my global outlook. Last but not less, it is a valuable experience to stepping out of my comfort zone and adapt to a new environment. There, I have to look after myself and he think this will encourage personal growth.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Katie Steller, a hairdresser, is one of my neighbor. She drives to the city to give free haircuts to the homeless for every two weeks. Up to then, Steller has given about 150 haircuts to people around city. When asked why she enjoyed doing this, she always answers, "It is something what is meaningful to me. " She wants it to being a way not only to show kindness and also to get to know more people. Any of the homeless even get jobs because of their good haircuts. Katie said she felt very happily when some people recognized her on the street.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Charles,
I’m written to express my thanks to you for inviting me to sing a Chinese song at Chinese Music Festival sponsor by your school. As for my singing perform, I have some ideas.
There are a number Chinese songs people from different countries love. The song named Mom in the Candlelight is my favorite. I like it because of its wonderfully theme and its accompaniment of erhu, which are one of the famous Chinese instruments. I’d like to accompany myself on erhu in person, because I hope you can prepare the one for me.
I hope to meet you as sooner as possible. And I’m sure we will have funs during the festival.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua