增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Bai's love of reading and travelling contributed his romantic style. He started studying the classics earlier when he was only five years old. He is reading ancient philosophers of different schools at the age of ten, including Confucianism and Taoism. By reading books of all the kinds, he got familiar with classical Chinese culture. More importantly, he acquired the wisdom of previous generation. Li Bai's romantic style was also deeply rooted in the social but historical context in that he lived. As we all know, Li Bai grew up in the most glory period of the Tang Dynasty. This open and tolerant atmosphere had a huge impact on her poetic production. Today, Li Bai's poetry continues to be enjoying by countless readers around the world.
2 . 假定英语课老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Though ancient China was a place where states fought with each other, but it was also a time when there was great philosophers. Confucius is the philosopher who influence has been the greatest. He stressed the important of kindness, duty and order in society. Chinese society has been influence by these ideas for more than 2000 years. Mozi is other teacher who is very influential. He spent many years trying find a state where people would follow his teachings. Mozi believed that all men were equally. Mozi taught that we should love all human beings and looked after those who are weaker than themselves.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend, I accompanied my grandma with acupuncture (针灸). As she has been suffering some health issues, she decided to try this traditional Chinese medical treatments. The acupuncturist greeted us warmly and asked about my grandma’s symptoms while we arrived at the clinic. After a thoroughly examination, he explains the process and benefits of acupuncture. My grandma was a bit nervous so I held her hands calm her. After the session, my grandma felt a sense of relief. The acupuncturist told her to rest and drink a plenty of water. We thanked him for his care and left the clinic. While walking back home, my grandma shared his experience with me, express the admiration for the magic of acupuncture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
This morning I went to my favorite restaurant for breakfast as usually. Touched by an elderly couple next to me, so I offered to pay for them. Knowing their request, the owner there told me one of her unforgettable day. It was a cold morning that she went with her baby to the store. Her baby was screaming and crying, and she said sorry to all the other people try to shop in peace. Then, when she got the bill, she realized that someone else have paid for it. It touched her so much that it brings her to tears. After she saw me doing this, it reminded her that moment which meant so much to her.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We had a school trip last Sunday. Hundreds of us took part in it excited.
At 8:00 a. m., we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in highly spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenery. When someone fall behind, others would come to offer help. About two hour later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot of. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed us. What wonderful experience!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Although the first time I flew on a plane were eight years ago, but I can still remember how afraid I was that day. As the child, I had wondered what it would be like to flying on a plane. In March of 2011, I went on my first plane ride with my parents. We flew from Beijing to London to visit ours relatives. It was a large plane. There were a lot people on it. I was very nervous during the journey that I did not eat any meal. I stay awake all the way. I wouldn’t go to the bathroom. I cannot tell you, how relaxing I was when the plane final landed at the airport.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Several days ago, my classmates and I visited to the Cincinnati School for the Blind and Deaf. We had party with some of the student there and had a wonderful time. I met a girl at the party. She couldn’t speak or hear, but we “talked” by writing on each other hands. When saying goodbye, she writes on my hand, “Please come here as often as possible.” Many people are concerning about disabled people and give her money. However, I think which we should do is to communicate with them rather than give money. If you want to help disabled people, making friends with them and visit them regularly. Nothing is much important than friendship.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is now easier than ever to accessing the Internet, whether you are using a computer or a smartphone. There is no doubt that many young people are spending more and more time on online, with both positive and negative consequence. They can do research for their schoolwork and homework. This often help teenagers to wide their knowledge and improve their grades. However, some become addicting to online gaming and this can mean that they waste too many time playing these games. Personal, I think the Internet is such useful tool that the benefits of Internet access outweigh the dangers. In short, we should make use of the Internet in a better way to improve itself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多若(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place in which I like. In this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
Today, when I walked to home after school, I found the sunset was very beautifully. I stopped at the park and sit on a bench to appreciate the scenery. There was so many people who had a walk at the park, most of whom were old couples. There was a special couple walk hand in hand, who caught my attention. The old woman couldn’t walk well so there was something wrong with her right legs. The old man took care of them carefully. They set good example to the young couples, showing that true love is. Against the sunset, they made up a beautiful scene.
