增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a senior 3 student, I have been busy with my study and seldom does any housework. I decided to give the rooms a thoroughly cleaning to surprise my parents on last Sunday. Firstly, I collected newspapers, books, and snacks scattered in the rooms and put it in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furnitures. After that, I sweep and mopped the floors. My parents were quite surprise to see all the rooms were neat and tidy. Tired as I was, I felt sense of achievement when I saw satisfaction in their eyes. Doing these chores can help me not only improve some basic life skills and understand my parents daily efforts better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was waiting at the train station with a friend when a man was asked to borrow my phone. He was in a hurry and seemed disappointedly. He then called his family or said he had spent all his cashes on a wrong ticket. The train station wouldn’t let him change it, what left him at a loss. We talked for a while and I ended up giving him $20 buy a new ticket.
My friend said he hoped the man was telling a truth. In my view, it’s common to be a little sceptical about how the man’s story was real. Anyway, offering him $20 to get himself out of trouble feeling like the right thing to do at that moment.
错误,每句话中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The traditional Chinese lunar year divides the year into 24 solar terms. On the first day of Winter Solstice(冬至), the Northern Hemisphere(半球)experiences the short day in the year, with the sun at its weakest point. The Winter Solstice also marks with the arrival of the coldest season in the year, brought with it a chill that can be felt in the air.
There is a saying in ancient China, “The Winter Solstice is as important as the Spring Festival.” As early as the Zhou Dynasty, people worshipped(崇拜)nature on the first day of the Winter Solstice, what was also the first day of the new year. The Winter Solstice becomes a winter festival during the Han Dynasty. Celebrations were official organized. On this day, both officials and common people would have the rest from their daily routine. During the following dynasty, such as the Tang, Song and Qing Dynasties, the Winter Solstice was a day to offer sacrifices(祭祀)for ancestors.
Overall, the Winter Solstice holds great significance in Chinese culture and has celebrated for centuries.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
刪除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Welcome to the world of ice and snow! The winter wonderland is a influential tourist attraction of Harbin. Here, exciting is the easiest thing to find. This year’s seasonal theme park covering an area of over 800,000 square meters. And it’s made up of thousands of massive ice carvings and some entertain activities. Climbing to the top of the Ice and Snow World, I realized why Harbin could have so a successful story. It is Harbin where local residents will be give free rides to visitors. It is Harbin where authorities will prepare non-slip carpets or public warming shelters. It is Harbin where you can total enjoy yourself with no worries at all. When it comes to using winter tourism to boost it economy, Harbin seems have already taken the first step.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
During last year’s Spring Festival, I organized a badminton match for my large family. I came up this idea because we tended to overeating and failed to do enough exercise during this period these years. “My proposal won support from my uncles, aunts, several cousins or especially my grandparents.” When asking by my father why I chose this sport, I said almost everyone could play the badminton. The match, what lasted for the whole afternoon, ends without a winner. But after the match, we were quite “energy and relaxed.” Festivals are occasions for happy, but they can never be achieved without health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I like the sea. Bringing up by the sea, I’m deeply attached of the blue sea. In the morning, when there are not many passer-by, I like to go to the seaside alone and feel the charm of the sea.
As breeze comes, the ripples (涟漪) in the sea will rise and fall, just like fairies dancing merry on the water. As I watch a waves, I can also smelt the saltiness of the sea. When the sun gradually rise from the east, the sunshine seems give the sea a golden cover. At this very moment, I cannot help but to shout, “How beautiful scenery it is!”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
What a long winter vacation! I stayed at home done nothing except homework every day as a robot. One day, an idea occurred to me, “Why not to find a part-time job to learn something newly?” The next morning, after visiting many shop, I was lucky enough to find one in a small but pretty cake shop. When tired-looking old man came in to buy a cake, I immediately helped him sit down in a chair and then brought him the cake. After he paid for them, I said thanks to him. He looked so happy which he praised me with a satisfying smile. From this, I learned, “Be good to others or they’ll be good to you. ”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)）不计分。
Last Sunday I participated in the exciting outdoor activity with my friends. We go hiking in the mountains nearby, and it was a pleasant experience. We got up early than usual to pack our backpacks with water, food and other necessary thing. When we got there, we started with our hike. The path was challenging, but the scenery was amazed. As we hiked, we chatted, laughed, and encouraging each other. We also had breaks and took photos. When they finally completed the hike, we were tired out but happy. I was extreme delighted to spend time with my friends in nature and enjoy the fresh air and sunshine. It was an unforgettable walk indeed, I can’t wait to have another chance to hike with them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（⋀），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With World Poetry Day approach, a fascinating activity called “Poetry Night” was held by our school on last Friday, attracting lots of teachers and students.
Among various and joyful activity, the Hometown Poetry Contest goes off with a bang! Every participant asked to create a poem. The most amazed poem was chosen by the students present, but you can appreciate it in the newspaper. Another striking highlight was the following prize-giving ceremony that contestants read their poems to the audience. How a wonderful night!
Undoubted, it has proved to be a huge success, bringing the power and beauty of poetry to the whole school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the nine grade, I decided to learn German. I was fully expecting to understand every words I came across. But the German class was so bored. Each day, Mr. Keady would ask us to open our books and read the words. I raise my hand one afternoon when we were asked to do so again, what was really not easy for me. Mr. Keady asked what was wrong and I explained why. I expected Mr. Keady to angry send me to the head teacher. But she sat at his desk quietly. A while later, he said he would to think about my words. In the following weeks, Geman classes didn’t become what I had hoped, and Mr. Keady tried harder to involve us his classes.
