增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The famous environmentalist, Professor Jin, was invited deliver a speech in our school last Friday. He started with an universally accepted theory explaining how the Earth began. We were shocking that there were so many kinds of living thing on the planet long time ago. However, he also showed how the appearance of some species happened later. It was human activities that large changed the global environment. He pointed out we should attach importance to protect the environment. It decided that we were able to continue to live on this planet in the future or not. I was deeply impressed by her speech. I think of it is important to protect our only home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of the Internet，it is easily for people to find information in just a few minutes. The Internet is like a huge library in where you can find whatever you want without walk around. It make our life convenient and colorful. And recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. They have been reports in China about people trying to steal person information for bad purposes. Also，some information does harm for society. For example，you can even find so information as how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future if not dealing with.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分.
On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great variety of robot. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, including playing chess, playing piano and drawing pictures. What's more, the robots are in different kinds and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition, that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced just as if we were dancers on the stage. By visit Robot World, I have learned a lot about robots, especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is so powerful that it makes us to feel more comfortable to live in the world.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Collecting stamps are my favorite, which benefits me a great deal of. For me, a stamp is not a piece of paper merely , and a record of history. A stamp tells me about the time, place and country of their origin. In my spare time, I always arrange the stamps and sticking them properly in an album. Now I have three albums of stamps, which I looked after carefully. I enjoy the beautiful of these stamps. I come know about the history, geography, and culture of a country from the stamps. I am proudly of myself to be in love with the hobbies.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One morning that I was in primary school, I tried cooking for first time. As my parents weren’t in, I have to cook something to eat. I took an egg from the refrigerator, putting some oil in the pan and cracked an egg into it. After a few second, I tried to turn the egg over in case it would get burnt. Unexpectedly, it caught fire. Not known what to do, I screamed but rushed out of the kitchen. After a while, I realized I should put out the fire, so I returned back, only to find something but a black burnt egg. I’ve learned that I can’t be too carefully while cooking.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Father's Day is coming. At first， that I want to do is to buy a bunch of flowers for my dad to express my thank for his hard work to bring me up a little card will be attached with the flowers， said "Happy Father's Day!" Considering that my dad is busy with his work that he often forgets to do exercise， I intended to accompany him to work out in the nearest gym from our home after the meal. As far as I know， the gym is well equipping and offers service of highly quality. After returning back home， I shall read the letter I write in advance to her.
I hope my dad will have a happy Father's Day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am extreme happy to know you are coming to our school next semester as an exchange students. I even can’t wait to meet you.
When it comes to learn traditional Chinese painting, you are very lucky. Our school had set up various optional courses, Chinese painting including. The students meet on every Wednesday afternoon from 3pm. to 5pm. With the professional teacher’s help, not only can you improve your skill, but also you will make many friends. That you have to do is register on our website. Besides, tools like Chinese brush, ink and paper is also necessary. If there is anything else I can help, be free let me know.
Looking forward to your arrival.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took a trip to China a few months before. It was a wonderful experience where is beyond description. We spent three weeks visit Beijing, Shanghai and several other tourist attraction. The closer we approached the center of China, the much I liked it. Then we went to Hong Kong last week, which I think is different with Beijing. It is noisiest place I have ever seen. And another thing that give me a deep impression was the people in China—they were so much friendly. Anyway, the trip itself was interested. I can't wait to flying to China again.
