增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I still remember my working experience in a restaurant last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a meal. However, that attracted my attention was not the menu, but a notice that said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements and thought maybe I could had a try. On arriving home, I talk to my parents about get a part-time job in the restaurant during the summer vacation. They strong supported me. Determined to challenge me, I went to the interview. Fortunately, I passed it but I was really pride of myself!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Xiao Li,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English al oud and try to learn something important by heart, which can help you remember it easily and form the good habit of think in English. I listen a lot of and talk with others in English. However, I have improved my spoken English. I keep an diary in English every day and my written English are becoming better and better. I also try my best master the necessary grammar. In this way, I can expressed myself in English correctly. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be very use to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning, I planned to have a long sleep, but my mother woke me up in a louder voice, “Time to get up, sweetheart.” It was just 8: 30 in the morning, so I reply, “It’s still early, Mum. I want to sleep again.” However, no sooner had I continued my sleep than my mother pulled me out of bed. When my parents and I started out for their home in the countryside, the weather was fine and I was cheerfully. Upon arriving at our farmland, we began to work in the field. At the beginning, my mother taught me what to grow vegetables. And it took me some minutes learn to take the care of them. After that, I was asked to turn over the soil with a digger and I soon ran out of my energy. Although do farm work was tiring, but I had a really great day. Now I realize it is of great important to do farm work even for us students because we should have any labor education.
When I was a child, I hope to live in the city. I think I would be happy here. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in the countrysides. The air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Reading have a lot of benefits. It can open up our eyes because of books are full of knowledge. I like reading newspapers and magazines from that I get lots of fun and learn about what’s going on around the world. I also read storybooks or novels which make me relaxing and happy. I seldom read e-book because they’re bad for eyes. On weekends, I usual spend a whole afternoon read in the library. And I also read for about half the hour before going to bed every night. Now I am going to read more classics as well as English books improve my language skills. I’m sure reading can make a difference to my life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off on 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got her out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly injured. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we will never forget it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I bought a book about motivation the few weeks ago. My mother asked me that I would like to share it with others when she finished reading the book. Of course, I was willingly to give it to those who wanted it. It occurs to me that I should send it to my friend, Pam. She supported me through my learning journey but I valued her friendship greatly. Fortunately, she was being admitted into a key university last year. I told her pass it on to someone else if it wasn’t fit to her. I hoped that it would be reading instead of sitting on my bookshelf.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many teachers are talking about the importance of after-class activity, that is believed to bring more creativity to the class. Actually, the traditional class pays much attention to the knowledges from the books all the time, and it is easy let students feel bored. As a result, every student is so exciting about the PE class, so they can enjoy the freedom in it. After-class activity offers students in a different way to broaden their mind and inspire their creativity. Students feeling relaxed and can think in an actively way. Many great people get his idea from nature, so if teachers wanted to improve students’ interest, the good learning place should not be limited in the classroom.
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer software. As an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the seaside to spend my summer holiday with my family in last year. We stayed there for about two weeks. The weather was much hot than that in my hometown, but I got used to it. Every morning, I get up early and went for breakfast ahead of time. Then I went the beach and talked with John which was my new friend. I came across her on my first morning there. John were warm-hearted and he seemed to be very familiarly with the seaside village. Sooner we became very good friends. We have kept write to each other ever since then.
